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His approach never sentimental
She loves him with such passion
He hurts her without compassion

A love given with heart and soul
He was never the one to console
Prays to god to release her from hell
All that's left of her is an empty shell

Her wedding dress became her veil
Her home has now become her jail
A crown of thorns he placed on her head
Her life blood flows crimson red

A princess she always wanted to be
Now she longs for the day to be free
She wanted a crown of jewels not thorns
Her daddy's words echo she was warned

What has she done to feel so much pain
Why does he treat her with a taste of disdain
She did no wrong same old song
Where is the sense of right and wrong

Reflection in the mirror blackened eyes
Nothing she does pleases him why?
A crown of thorns cuts deeper inside
There is no place to run or hide

His fists possess great powers
She wears the thorns not flowers
He veiled the future from her sight
No joy filled days just darkened nights

She looks for rest throughout the night
Praying to be refreshed in morning light
No strength to reach the journeys end
Takes comfort in her sisters arms her friend

Which will you choose my sister be wise
Open your door your heart your eyes
Burn that crown of thorns that dig deep
My sister you deserve some beauty sleep

Love Angelxxxxxx


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CROWN OF THORNS

Contributed by sweetangeluk on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 10:22:04 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



His touch was never gentle
His approach never sentimental
She loves him with such passion
He hurts her without compassion

A love given with heart and soul
He was never the one to console
Prays to god to release her from hell
All that's left of her is an empty shell

Her wedding dress became her veil
Her home has now become her jail
A crown of thorns he placed on her head
Her life blood flows crimson red

A princess she always wanted to be
Now she longs for the day to be free
She wanted a crown of jewels not thorns
Her daddy's words echo she was warned

What has she done to feel so much pain
Why does he treat her with a taste of disdain
She did no wrong same old song
Where is the sense of right and wrong

Reflection in the mirror blackened eyes
Nothing she does pleases him why?
A crown of thorns cuts deeper inside
There is no place to run or hide

His fists possess great powers
She wears the thorns not flowers
He veiled the future from her sight
No joy filled days just darkened nights

She looks for rest throughout the night
Praying to be refreshed in morning light
No strength to reach the journeys end
Takes comfort in her sisters arms her friend

Which will you choose my sister be wise
Open your door your heart your eyes
Burn that crown of thorns that dig deep
My sister you deserve some beauty sleep

Love Angelxxxxxx






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Re: CROWN OF THORNS (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:21:51 AM AEST
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First of all it is not her, it is him. Abuse is a cycle and the it ranges from charming to being a monster. This poem was very powerful and all you can do is to reassure her that you are there and for her to get out. You touched me with this one. Kie


Re: CROWN OF THORNS (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:03:26 PM AEST
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Wow this is so sad but written well.
I've never been phyciacally abused but I've been verbally abused. Either way it hurts like hell and the scars arn't easy to deal with. I agree with kie, it's not here fault.
The problem is his as it's a phycological fact that abuse like this, the perpretator is very insecure in himself so he trys to lay the guilt on her to take focus off him. She needs to get help for herself. It's posible for a person to change but not that likely as he has deep seated problems in his sub conscience that he needs to deal with. A person can pray without ceasing but unless he wants help and admits it then she best jus go her way and send him on his. It takes a person a long time to feel good about themselves again, meaning her.
Since he beats her she best get out and then watch her back. It's a very serious thing. I don't mean to scar eanyone but she needs to get out and then, especially then watch her back.
Good luck with helping her.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: CROWN OF THORNS (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 07:44:12 AM AEST
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this is so sad. I pray God gives her the strength to get away from the maniac. My ex abused me verbally and honelstly I'd rather live alone the rest of my life than live with his ignorent abuse.
It's haard to leave but in the end she'd be better for it.
she needs to realize that some men are jus this way and will never change unless it's an act of God and unless he wants change then it will never happen.
I will keep her in my prayers.
I know this is hard on u to see this and wonna help. Jus try to help her realize he's the one with the problem not her.
luv, huggs, prayers,
emy


Re: CROWN OF THORNS (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 03:27:08 PM AEST
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Great poem. No one should ever have to suffer abuse.


Re: CROWN OF THORNS (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 10:08:56 AM AEST
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What a beautifil sad poem. I'm sory to hear some one is going through such pain.
Blu


Re: CROWN OF THORNS (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:58:17 PM AEST
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beautiful poem tragic situations, an esensial peice of writting if ever there was one, wish u well . . .

Dorian Chambers




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