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Heir To The Throne (Pt.3)
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 09:17:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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The Princess gazed out the window as she watched her father leave, he had all his armour on ready for a battle. She watched him as he mounted his tall black stallion, she had the feeling that this will be the last time she sees her father alive. The Princess saw her father ride off across the land, he never gave his daughter the final farewell before he left. She paced the floors, she walked the long hallway, went downstairs and stood outside. The sun's rays beamed brightly down upon her as she wept, she didn't know what else to do. Meanwhile, into town where the Princesses father finally arrived, he had noble knights watching his evil brother's every move, this was the day, the King, was going to avenge his wife's murder. The noble knights cornered the King's brother, the clanking of the metal from the swords, rang out through the town. The King's noble knights and the King's brothers knights, battled to their deaths. The air cleared and the only two men left standing, were the King and his brother. Finally, after all these years, they met face to face.
Copyright Cynthia Jones Mar.10/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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Re: Heir To The Throne (Pt.3)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 12:49:05 AM AEST (User
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I had been wondering when pt.3 would appear. Now I am biting my nails. If all goes the way the world should be, the good will win, but we all know life doesn't always work that way. Hmmmmmmm, now I just have to sit and wait again. [tap tap tapping of impatient nails on the desk]
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Re: Heir To The Throne (Pt.3)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:22:49 PM AEST (User
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ooo, i like i like!! good storytelling, i love it! hope to read the other part coming in... ;0)
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Re: Heir To The Throne (Pt.3)
(User Rating: 1 ) by loveisendless on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:25:53 AM AEST (User
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IT GETS MORE & MORE INTRIGUING & MAKES ME CRAZY TO WAIT FOR THE END!
VERY WELL WRITTEN!!
LOL-DAN!!! |
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