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I won't die...
Said the man with the cig in his hand
(His favourite brand)

The pain in my head? It's ok
Nothing to keep me in bed
I won't die...
Said the man with the cig in his hand

The cramps in my chest? It's ok
I've took a blood test
I should be fine...
Said the man with the cig in his hand

The swelling in my throat? It's ok
I'm sure there's an antidote
I should be fine...
Said the man with the cig in his hand

The man on his deathbed? Poor chap
He'll soon be dead
Throat cancer got him...
Said the woman with the cig in her hand
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 39 [informant] => adsalamon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Smokey Killer

Contributed by adsalamon on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:15:52 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

The cough in the morning, It's ok
I won't die...
Said the man with the cig in his hand
(His favourite brand)

The pain in my head? It's ok
Nothing to keep me in bed
I won't die...
Said the man with the cig in his hand

The cramps in my chest? It's ok
I've took a blood test
I should be fine...
Said the man with the cig in his hand

The swelling in my throat? It's ok
I'm sure there's an antidote
I should be fine...
Said the man with the cig in his hand

The man on his deathbed? Poor chap
He'll soon be dead
Throat cancer got him...
Said the woman with the cig in her hand

Copyright © adsalamon ... [ 2004-03-23 13:15:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Smokey Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:45:43 PM AEST
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As a strong smoker I agree with all you have written. Smoking kills in various ways. cheers from bernard.

Re: Smokey Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:44:25 PM AEST
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I'm an antismoker too, thought this was very thought provoking, hope it works on some people who read this, well done 10/10

Ali xx

Re: Smokey Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 03:11:25 PM AEST
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Well I'm A 20yr Old That Smokes.
This Really Got To Me Cause
I May Have Throat Cancer....I've Been Smoking Every Since I Was Like
9yrs Old Behind My MoM And DaD's Back
Until Now......If I Had It To Do All Over Again
I Would Have Never Started Smoking....
I've Got To See A Otorhinolaryngology
Tomorrow For Some Tests To See If I Do
Have Throat Cancer...This Will Make
Non~Smokers Think Before They Start
The Habbit..Glad You Posted It....
Very Great Write .....
,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,
Oh Incase Your Wondering Otorh.
Is A Ear~Nose~And~Throat~Specialist...

Re: Smokey Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by NewsFromNowhere on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 06:57:32 PM AEST
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Smoking's cool and you know it Mr.Adrian sir. :p

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