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Array ( [sid] => 39916 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Keeping In Step [time] => 2004-03-23 13:56:07 [hometext] => chasing love and rainbows..... [bodytext] => __________________

keeping in step with you
erased all the past
blended into background
meaningless rubble
heaped in the corners
nothing to trip over
or stumble upon
keeping in step with you
ready and able
willing to please
bend over backwards
without question
expectations are nill
hope sits in my hip pocket
keeping in step with you
racing out ahead
taunt me if you will
there is little dignity
and more desire
in the weakness of flesh
corrupt and bankrupt
keeping in step with you
lead me off and away
without any reason
I follow blind and needy
for something I don't know
but you have it
and I want it
keeping in step with you

gmm 2004 [comments] => 5 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 2 [informant] => merry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Keeping In Step

Contributed by merry on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:56:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

__________________

keeping in step with you
erased all the past
blended into background
meaningless rubble
heaped in the corners
nothing to trip over
or stumble upon
keeping in step with you
ready and able
willing to please
bend over backwards
without question
expectations are nill
hope sits in my hip pocket
keeping in step with you
racing out ahead
taunt me if you will
there is little dignity
and more desire
in the weakness of flesh
corrupt and bankrupt
keeping in step with you
lead me off and away
without any reason
I follow blind and needy
for something I don't know
but you have it
and I want it
keeping in step with you

gmm 2004

Copyright © merry ... [ 2004-03-23 13:56:07]
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Re: Keeping In Step (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:13:17 PM AEST
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dearest gaille, this is excellent, i love your style of writing so much, always so vibrant and alive, your poetry breathes:) huggies, woofies n' love nessa

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Re: Keeping In Step (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:17:51 PM AEST
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I agree with Nessa...your poetry has life in each word. I dont read it..I feel it.

Beautifully done as always
Roses
Larry

Re: Keeping In Step (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:31:39 PM AEST
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So Beautiful.....Loved It.....
Awesome Write....
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVeL,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Re: Keeping In Step (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 03:11:34 PM AEST
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wonderful write most enjoyable
michelle

Re: Keeping In Step (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:15:28 AM AEST
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Don't I know it ... every word shouts to me ... as always you speak the words that fill my heart ... Jan

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