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[title] => Under the knife
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[bodytext] => Unconsciousness turns towards fatal being The rewards of living yet pass by as quickly as the Hand flies by Staggering legs filled with nauseous feelings Counting back from ten-nine-eight-sevvenn-si.. Relaxing to the white glare eventually fades away Hoping to prevail this mind Day by day living in this much pain Soon waking up to the three-two-one Revealing worries and un-excitement Hearing nothing but an annoying beeping And retina has not stated its purpose Feeling absolutely worthless Gazing at the hurtful ending Keen that this pain would subside me in the unknown space Watching tears roll down my face In some what commemoration from when i was young.. Oh how great it would be to be young again But then there would still be bruises and scraped knees What's so great about the living body Overwhelmed with hurtful situations and stubborn Aspect towards things you cant conquer Living by the rules that have no answers This is the real world Real life Real situations Painful but true But soon my body will heal Waiting to see the hand fly by faster than i have ever seen before And eventually letting the sounds 1-10 come out [comments] => 4 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 61 [informant] => neglected1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
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