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Array ( [sid] => 40174 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Destroy me, I'll destroy you [time] => 2004-03-25 05:43:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you have no idea at all
to how much you kill me
sometimes I hate you so much
that inside it kills me

you ruin everything for me
never helped with anything
your the only person that destroys me
the only one that makes me forget everything

sometimes I wish I could kill you
just grab this chair and smash your head
stick thousands of knives in you
and keep going even if you were dead

I wan to see the blood pouring out
I want to see you in agony, in pain
there's nothing else that will satisfy me
I just want to kill you over and over again

my mind races with different ways
of putting you in pain and destroying you
endless memories where I had to spend days
with you and this anguish you've put me through

would I rather die than see you die?
maybe I actually would
at least I'd be rid of you
and my life will finally be good [comments] => 3 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 13 [informant] => pompous [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Destroy me, I'll destroy you

Contributed by pompous on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 05:43:10 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

you have no idea at all
to how much you kill me
sometimes I hate you so much
that inside it kills me

you ruin everything for me
never helped with anything
your the only person that destroys me
the only one that makes me forget everything

sometimes I wish I could kill you
just grab this chair and smash your head
stick thousands of knives in you
and keep going even if you were dead

I wan to see the blood pouring out
I want to see you in agony, in pain
there's nothing else that will satisfy me
I just want to kill you over and over again

my mind races with different ways
of putting you in pain and destroying you
endless memories where I had to spend days
with you and this anguish you've put me through

would I rather die than see you die?
maybe I actually would
at least I'd be rid of you
and my life will finally be good

Copyright © pompous ... [ 2004-03-25 05:43:10]
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Re: Destroy me, I'll destroy you (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:26:32 AM AEST
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whoa... *steps back slowly* ... there, there - nice pompous, nice nice pompous... lol, good but psycho writing! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Destroy me, I'll destroy you (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:20:30 PM AEST
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great write . very real and raw with emotion, I enjoyed it, keep up the good work :)

Re: Destroy me, I'll destroy you (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:06:47 AM AEST
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That gave me shivers up and down my spine, Pomp... nothing has ever done that before... wow

Great job!

Lindsey

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