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Moving On
Contributed by
emphaticplacebo
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 09:21:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I look into your eyes, and it is nothing that I see
Nothing like what I expected, or wanted it to be
I wanted to see us, in your eyes, loving forever
But its not what I saw, I didnt see us together
Why must it be doomed for us, destined to hate
How can so naive, and just put it all down to fate
I dont believe in that crap and neither should you
Because real love defies boundaries and fate too
Why is it when I touch you, you just turn away
Is it someone else, if it is, thats all you have to say
It saddens me, that you couldn't stay committed
It angers me that I wasn't the only shoe you fitted
What will happen from here, only a fool would say
I'll find someone better, thats usually the way
It wouldn't be that hard to move on after you
Because real love defies lies and deception too
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Re: Moving On
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by Kie on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:10:09 AM AEST
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| Well this one hit me straight in the heart, first thing in the morning! Would it help if I said i've been there before? Probably not but I sure loved this poem. Kie |
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Re: Moving On
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:55:13 AM AEST
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I love this poem it goes straight to the heart.
Even though it's sad.good job.:o) |
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Re: Moving On
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:55:26 AM AEST
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| Emotional poem, well-written and touching. Well done. |
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