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Array ( [sid] => 4020 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Woman's Work is Never Done [time] => 2002-09-19 06:47:18 [hometext] => I wrote this today after an agrument with my boyfriend last night. Its an incomplete poem. [bodytext] => There is no reason it has to be like this.
Why can't we say "I'm sorry" and just kiss?
My stomach is in knots and its hard to smile.
I haven't seen you in quite awhile.

I think about what I should do.
I feel so hurt and its because of you.
How can I punish someone I love so dear?
I can't, for my heart will be broken, I fear.

So I'll wait for you to see how I feel.
Until then I'll forgive and just learn how to deal.
I'll go on thinking everything is just fine.
A game of choices love is, I just hope you are mine.

I'll keep myself from causing you so much grief.
The nagging and bitching I'll blow away like a leaf.
Smiles and looks of love is all that you'll see.
I just really hope you'll love the real me.

I guess its too much to ask to want to see you.
I thought we have fun in all that we do.
Maybe its not me you are avoiding.
I need to stop my feelings from showing.

I need to be strong and let things go.
Its easy to say but hard to let my heart know.
Sometimes I feel that my heart beats for you.
But then I am hurt and I know that is not true.

You are the love of my life and always will be.
I will try and lighten up and let you be free.
But know that I am here and always will be yours.
I just wish spending time with me was less like a chore. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 426 [topic] => 2 [informant] => makx10 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
A Woman's Work is Never Done

Contributed by makx10 on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 06:47:18 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



There is no reason it has to be like this.
Why can't we say "I'm sorry" and just kiss?
My stomach is in knots and its hard to smile.
I haven't seen you in quite awhile.

I think about what I should do.
I feel so hurt and its because of you.
How can I punish someone I love so dear?
I can't, for my heart will be broken, I fear.

So I'll wait for you to see how I feel.
Until then I'll forgive and just learn how to deal.
I'll go on thinking everything is just fine.
A game of choices love is, I just hope you are mine.

I'll keep myself from causing you so much grief.
The nagging and bitching I'll blow away like a leaf.
Smiles and looks of love is all that you'll see.
I just really hope you'll love the real me.

I guess its too much to ask to want to see you.
I thought we have fun in all that we do.
Maybe its not me you are avoiding.
I need to stop my feelings from showing.

I need to be strong and let things go.
Its easy to say but hard to let my heart know.
Sometimes I feel that my heart beats for you.
But then I am hurt and I know that is not true.

You are the love of my life and always will be.
I will try and lighten up and let you be free.
But know that I am here and always will be yours.
I just wish spending time with me was less like a chore.




Copyright © makx10 ... [ 2002-09-19 06:47:18]
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Re: A Woman's Work is Never Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 07:40:16 AM AEST
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sounds finished to me, hope everything works out for you, good write


Re: A Woman's Work is Never Done (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 03:53:49 PM AEST
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It sounds complete to me Meg. Excellent.




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