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Revealed
Contributed by
we_were_left_darkling
on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:30:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Feeble fascination reveals
raw redness beneath the skin
The rot of moss and sickly hue
Of humours coursing through
Rising levels sinking in.
Dont think the chase will end
The subtlety of vaguery fades
Skin the membrane shield
Bludgeoned by the real
So old mists pass away.
I make no pretence to know
The slow swing and fleeting high
Gibbets fall and soon dissolve
Wooden arms too dry and old
What providence lends, eternity defies.
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2004-03-25 10:30:29]
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Re: Revealed
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by Merry on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:39:34 AM AEST
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lovely flowing words - well done. I felt a sense of resignation in your poem, looking inward at life and where one has been.
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Re: Revealed
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by emphaticplacebo on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:19:49 PM AEST
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| awesome write, I love the train of thought you had.. I lookf orward to reading more form you :) |
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Re: Revealed
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by Flex4life13 on
Monday, 27th June 2011 @ 06:26:59 PM AEST
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| excellent writing! |
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