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i can no longer distinguish
this place has filled me up with doubt
i cannot silence the anguish
subtle smiles no longer exchanged
trapped inside despair
wandering through my twisted mind
taste the misery in the air
no one can hear these silent screams
hungering for something more
haunted love i can't achieve
my amount of worth hits the floor
why do things seem meaningless?
why do i no longer care?
you're surrounded by your carelessness
but i cannot sense you there
this cold has stolen away my breath
gasping with surprise
and here, i know that i'm the cause
nothing more i can surmise
if you allow me not to stay
i'll leave, but not for good
you've destroyed all that i am
only because you could

I'm watching.
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I'm Watching.

Contributed by liquidchaos on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:43:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

sitting somewhere close to me
i can no longer distinguish
this place has filled me up with doubt
i cannot silence the anguish
subtle smiles no longer exchanged
trapped inside despair
wandering through my twisted mind
taste the misery in the air
no one can hear these silent screams
hungering for something more
haunted love i can't achieve
my amount of worth hits the floor
why do things seem meaningless?
why do i no longer care?
you're surrounded by your carelessness
but i cannot sense you there
this cold has stolen away my breath
gasping with surprise
and here, i know that i'm the cause
nothing more i can surmise
if you allow me not to stay
i'll leave, but not for good
you've destroyed all that i am
only because you could

I'm watching.

Copyright © liquidchaos ... [ 2004-03-25 12:43:00]
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Re: I'm Watching. (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:46:50 PM AEST
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Damn, that almost gave me chills at the end.
Umm, i take that back it did....

very powerful, great job.

I love the ending, love it.

Silent

Re: I'm Watching. (User Rating: 1 )
by pinkashes on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:41:45 PM AEST
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addie, i don't know if this is written about someone or if you made it up, but it feels so real. i love it, every new one gets better and better. ash

Re: I'm Watching. (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 09:49:26 PM AEST
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strong poem till the very end. excellent write.

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