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Her long hair shines her beauty, her soul it craves to mend.
Her smile gives out no secrets, her mouth can tell no lies,
Her glow she hides so well as you’re undressed with those eyes.

She’ll be your friend forever, but never promise much,
She’ll soon twist your emotions, if you escape her clutch.
She needs, she craves, she wants you, but she cannot admire
She needs her independence more than she needs to burn your fire.

Far away she smiles and listens to music in her head.
Dreams of elegantly slumming on a large four-poster bed.
To be too close is way too much - she must reject what’s good.
Her downfall’s her own purgatory, she loves “misunderstood”.

Her fast brain works on overtime, her skin in snow white tan
Her legs are almost perfect, but remember that she can.
Use everything she has to take whatever route she knows,
Her teeth may sink in slowly but your love for her just grows!

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Gothic Fairytale II

Contributed by pwei on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:50:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Her cold eyes show a burden, her warm heart needs a friend,
Her long hair shines her beauty, her soul it craves to mend.
Her smile gives out no secrets, her mouth can tell no lies,
Her glow she hides so well as you’re undressed with those eyes.

She’ll be your friend forever, but never promise much,
She’ll soon twist your emotions, if you escape her clutch.
She needs, she craves, she wants you, but she cannot admire
She needs her independence more than she needs to burn your fire.

Far away she smiles and listens to music in her head.
Dreams of elegantly slumming on a large four-poster bed.
To be too close is way too much - she must reject what’s good.
Her downfall’s her own purgatory, she loves “misunderstood”.

Her fast brain works on overtime, her skin in snow white tan
Her legs are almost perfect, but remember that she can.
Use everything she has to take whatever route she knows,
Her teeth may sink in slowly but your love for her just grows!

Copyright Â© pwei ... [ 2004-03-25 16:50:05]
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Re: Gothic Fairytale II (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 05:10:06 PM AEST
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each word intriques me this is perfectly flowing and wonderful
michelle

Re: Gothic Fairytale II (User Rating: 1 )
by ItsRayningTonite on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 05:55:02 PM AEST
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Its such a seductive poem, very well written

Re: Gothic Fairytale II (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 02:34:26 PM AEST
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excellent:) hugs n' love nessa

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