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Array ( [sid] => 40295 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => School Shooting [time] => 2004-03-25 22:26:27 [hometext] => DON'T WORRY, I DON'T HAVE A GUN!!! This is not REALLY going to happen... well, not by ME anyway... [bodytext] => I am the one
at the bottom of the pile.
I am the one you
push around.
I am the geek and the freak,
the outsider,
the wallflower.
I am the one you
pretend to ignore,
and joke that it’s
just the wind.
You tease and
hurt and beat me up,
day after day of my
miserable life.
Each rude remark,
each joke about me,
eats away at my
humanity.
I hate and hate as you
gloat and gloat.
You rise above me as
I spiral down in
rage.
You push and push
but I never
push back.
That is, until today.
Today I brought my
gun to school.
Today I took it out.
I took it out and shot
every in
the school
that I could find.
You are ALL to blame
for all the
pain inside me.
To those who did not
do things directly,
why didn’t you stop
those who did?
Why did you just
stand there and laugh,
egging them on?
With my small
black gun,
I ended many lives.
I shot their worthless
brains out.
I killed so many
of those morons,
and then I
shot myself,
for life is not worth
living
after they all
tore me apart. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 331 [topic] => 67 [informant] => WorthlesSanity666 [notes] => .....Edited by mod_6 for language...25-03-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => schoolproblems )

School Shooting

Contributed by WorthlesSanity666 on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:26:27 PM in AEST
Topic: schoolproblems

I am the one
at the bottom of the pile.
I am the one you
push around.
I am the geek and the freak,
the outsider,
the wallflower.
I am the one you
pretend to ignore,
and joke that it’s
just the wind.
You tease and
hurt and beat me up,
day after day of my
miserable life.
Each rude remark,
each joke about me,
eats away at my
humanity.
I hate and hate as you
gloat and gloat.
You rise above me as
I spiral down in
rage.
You push and push
but I never
push back.
That is, until today.
Today I brought my
gun to school.
Today I took it out.
I took it out and shot
every in
the school
that I could find.
You are ALL to blame
for all the
pain inside me.
To those who did not
do things directly,
why didn’t you stop
those who did?
Why did you just
stand there and laugh,
egging them on?
With my small
black gun,
I ended many lives.
I shot their worthless
brains out.
I killed so many
of those morons,
and then I
shot myself,
for life is not worth
living
after they all
tore me apart.

Copyright Â© WorthlesSanity666 ... [ 2004-03-25 22:26:27]
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Re: School Shooting (User Rating: 1 )
by Scott on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:39:56 PM AEST
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damn, do I ever know how that feels. but sometimes you have to push back a little or else they'll neve leave you alone. keep up the good work!

Re: School Shooting (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:54:21 PM AEST
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Wow powerful! Felt like that manytimes!

Re: School Shooting (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:56:34 PM AEST
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don't worry? If someone at school saw this you'd be carted off hollering.." Really....it's just poetry...trying to vent ya know?" beautiful verse and we just had 2 shootings and 2 stabbings at my grandkids high school. My husband who is a teacher says " someone needs to teach these kids to duck"...LOL but now days the mention of shooting and...well be careful. but good writing anyway 5 stars (ducking now~)

Re: School Shooting (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:41:43 PM AEST
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that recently happened at a high school in my
town. some senior couldn't hack anymore.
shot two people in the chest. please don't
be stupid.

Re: School Shooting (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:03:39 PM AEST
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wow thats so sad... but i know how you feel. i was the awkward kid at school and everyone knew there was something wrong with me, cause all the teachers "protected" me big time... people were always wondering what i was always so beaten up...cause no one at school ever got close enough to doing it... well anyhow, great write. thank you for sharing

Re: School Shooting (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:58:14 PM AEST
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it would be great if we could be rewarded for sticking up for our selves life is soo sh*t! and when we do rise then it's our fault always that they destroyed us to the ppint of insanity!
yes, i know exactly how you feel!

~deathdrop~

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