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Array ( [sid] => 40346 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => With the angels! [time] => 2004-03-26 11:11:07 [hometext] => Plzz tell me what you think!!!!! [bodytext] => I remember all the special things
Good and bad times we shared
Everything was the perfect way
Everything I did you cared

But when the accident happened
Sorry was all I could say
How little I did really know
It was close to your last day

They took you into hospital
Still you kept your brave face
We were hoping you’d be out soon
But that really wasn’t the case

On the last night I saw you
Something told me “say goodbye”
But instead I just ignored it
Still now I can’t tell you why

In the middle of the night I heard
It made me break down and cry
If only I’d listened to my heart
This can’t be your time to die

It was your time I know that now
Angels took you from us that night
They better be taking care of you
Just let me know you’re all right

All I have now are memories
After dark I look up to the sky
You’ll always be the brightest star
Watching my life pass me by

One day I will see you again
At the end of my very last day
You will be there to guide me
To heaven you’ll show me the way [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 21 [informant] => angelface [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
With the angels!

Contributed by angelface on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:11:07 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I remember all the special things
Good and bad times we shared
Everything was the perfect way
Everything I did you cared

But when the accident happened
Sorry was all I could say
How little I did really know
It was close to your last day

They took you into hospital
Still you kept your brave face
We were hoping you’d be out soon
But that really wasn’t the case

On the last night I saw you
Something told me “say goodbye”
But instead I just ignored it
Still now I can’t tell you why

In the middle of the night I heard
It made me break down and cry
If only I’d listened to my heart
This can’t be your time to die

It was your time I know that now
Angels took you from us that night
They better be taking care of you
Just let me know you’re all right

All I have now are memories
After dark I look up to the sky
You’ll always be the brightest star
Watching my life pass me by

One day I will see you again
At the end of my very last day
You will be there to guide me
To heaven you’ll show me the way




Copyright © angelface ... [ 2004-03-26 11:11:07]
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Re: With the angels! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:20:28 AM AEST
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A very honest, poignant poem.
Thanks for sharing.


Re: With the angels! (User Rating: 1 )
by geoffreyalanbest on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:22:55 AM AEST
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I know how you feel. Losing someone rips apart of yourselves out. ITs not the goodbyes that count its what you bring of them in yourself that matters.


Re: With the angels! (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:54:28 AM AEST
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It's absolutely beautiful maam and I know he must be smiling, pointing saying to the angels, there she is !...Russ




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