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Array ( [sid] => 4040 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Little Creatures in My Head [time] => 2002-09-19 21:10:03 [hometext] => For Dean and his "creatures" that he's trying to find... lol... [bodytext] => I have little creatures running through my head,
Keeping me awake at night while I lay there in bed,
Trying to describe them, not getting it quite right,
The creatures are causing mischief in my head at night.

Try to think of other things, try to sing a song,
I think about my little sprites all the night long,
Post a forum, look for pictures, anything indeed,
But my little creatures will not let go of me.

Red eyes, pointy ears, long and pointed nose,
I can describe those things from their head to toe,
But nothing that I look up is ever quite right,
I may be going insane, watching those creatures at night.

I have little creatures running through my head,
Keeping me awake at night while I lay there in my bed,
Trying to describe them, never getting it quite right,
I have little creatures in my head, causing mischief every night. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 7 [informant] => ginsdance [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

Little Creatures in My Head

Contributed by ginsdance on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 09:10:03 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

I have little creatures running through my head,
Keeping me awake at night while I lay there in bed,
Trying to describe them, not getting it quite right,
The creatures are causing mischief in my head at night.

Try to think of other things, try to sing a song,
I think about my little sprites all the night long,
Post a forum, look for pictures, anything indeed,
But my little creatures will not let go of me.

Red eyes, pointy ears, long and pointed nose,
I can describe those things from their head to toe,
But nothing that I look up is ever quite right,
I may be going insane, watching those creatures at night.

I have little creatures running through my head,
Keeping me awake at night while I lay there in my bed,
Trying to describe them, never getting it quite right,
I have little creatures in my head, causing mischief every night.

Copyright © ginsdance ... [ 2002-09-19 21:10:03]
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Re: Little Creatures in My Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 10:28:11 PM AEST
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Thankyou Jennifer,

It's probably a good idea to get these things down on paper or they'll send ya mad in the end ya know!!!

I am touched and speechless that you took the time, thankyou )x(

With love
Dean;-)

Re: Little Creatures in My Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 10:43:41 PM AEST
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LOL!!! This is so cute...I see he read it and liked it :)

Re: Little Creatures in My Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 05:37:00 AM AEST
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good expressions, liked this one alot,

Re: Little Creatures in My Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Chicken on Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 07:18:09 AM AEST
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good one gin

Re: Little Creatures in My Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 10:02:50 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this a lot Gin and obviously Dean did too...it made me smile.
I've not been here for a while for one reason and another but will try to catch up on some of your work.
Love
Chrissie x

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