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Array ( [sid] => 40405 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unbreakable breaking [time] => 2004-03-26 19:01:51 [hometext] => will you break me and set me free take my storm away from me... [bodytext] => You treat me in which i cant be broken
You created me with my fantasies you renamed them your own
Seeking to continue insanity into the unknown
I can guarantee madness
Shadows of my scattered brain trying to escape
Having my patience rain down on me
Return or throw away these problems that keep on returning each and every day
I'm falling into a step of darkness
Can you hear me calling, calling?
Will you break me and set me free
Take my storm away from me
Create your own life to live
Don't repeat in which the things i have said
Vanish yourself from my name
Or let my name ramain true
Take upon yourself to show yourself you are strong
Feelings of my limbs not being broken
Where does this come into play of yourself
A little secret i will let out
I can be broken
I'm not your little doll that you can parade around showing your treasures
Storms usually grow stronger
Impossible from hiding away from the jitters of lonesomeness
You already took so much from me
Its one place that i cant see but its another where i cant breathe
Understand my problem
I cant wait i have no choice
Would it be alright if i lived again?
This time the pieces are smaller and it seems like there's no way out
So i try, try a little harder
Break me and return me to my royal place
If i'm in a million pieces
I will remain whole to myself
Ask what you are
You'll never feel this real again
Let me be broken and discover my name
You remain the same [comments] => 2 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 32 [informant] => neglected1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Unbreakable breaking

Contributed by neglected1 on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 07:01:51 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



You treat me in which i cant be broken
You created me with my fantasies you renamed them your own
Seeking to continue insanity into the unknown
I can guarantee madness
Shadows of my scattered brain trying to escape
Having my patience rain down on me
Return or throw away these problems that keep on returning each and every day
I'm falling into a step of darkness
Can you hear me calling, calling?
Will you break me and set me free
Take my storm away from me
Create your own life to live
Don't repeat in which the things i have said
Vanish yourself from my name
Or let my name ramain true
Take upon yourself to show yourself you are strong
Feelings of my limbs not being broken
Where does this come into play of yourself
A little secret i will let out
I can be broken
I'm not your little doll that you can parade around showing your treasures
Storms usually grow stronger
Impossible from hiding away from the jitters of lonesomeness
You already took so much from me
Its one place that i cant see but its another where i cant breathe
Understand my problem
I cant wait i have no choice
Would it be alright if i lived again?
This time the pieces are smaller and it seems like there's no way out
So i try, try a little harder
Break me and return me to my royal place
If i'm in a million pieces
I will remain whole to myself
Ask what you are
You'll never feel this real again
Let me be broken and discover my name
You remain the same




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Re: Unbreakable breaking (User Rating: 1 )
by ADreamWithinADream on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 07:07:16 PM AEST
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WOw..that was...superb!! REALLY!! Keep it up....;)


Re: Unbreakable breaking (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:50:13 AM AEST
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This was sad but you expressed it so well. Loved the title and thought you did a great job on this one. Kie




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