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and sit alone and fret
I used to see the stars above, but now I ponder where they went
The world is just so simple, and yet there's pain we must endure
There's problems always rising not knowing where there from
I wish I had the answers to take away your pain
Instead I'll sit here waiting hoping that your safe
I shed a tear to watch you smile, but you 'll never know
the pain that I endured for you, because Im all alone. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 52 [informant] => JennyFruFru [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Sacrifice

Contributed by JennyFruFru on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:57:24 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I look into a deep dark sky
and sit alone and fret
I used to see the stars above, but now I ponder where they went
The world is just so simple, and yet there's pain we must endure
There's problems always rising not knowing where there from
I wish I had the answers to take away your pain
Instead I'll sit here waiting hoping that your safe
I shed a tear to watch you smile, but you 'll never know
the pain that I endured for you, because Im all alone.

Copyright © JennyFruFru ... [ 2004-03-27 00:57:24]
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Re: Sacrifice (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:33:21 AM AEST
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I'VE OFTEN DONE THE SAME I CAN TOTALLY RELATE TO THIS WRITE-GREAT READ-GREAT WRITE

Re: Sacrifice (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:27:28 PM AEST
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man that feeling sucks doesnt it? my advise is to just go ahead and tell the world how you feel...vary capturing poem...keep it up

Re: Sacrifice (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:56:24 PM AEST
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In spite of your feelings at the time of writing this very good poem keep smiling it helps a lot cheers from bernard.

Re: Sacrifice (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:57:16 PM AEST
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it's interesting. you've made a copy of my life right now. i'm worried about another memeber on this site. only i've never seen her before. we just write though email.

Re: Sacrifice (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:01:37 PM AEST
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One of the greatest things a person can do is doing something for someone else, without their knowledge. It is really hard, though.
Well written!
Take care.
David

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