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Array ( [sid] => 40460 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ode to my Love [time] => 2004-03-27 02:24:18 [hometext] => * * * [bodytext] => I am the Lord, you are my immutable word
I am the great ego, you are my great illusion
I am the ether, you are my endless vibration
I am the ocean; you aremy waters of creation
I am the sun; you are my brilliant light
I am the fire, you are my burning power
I am the moon; you are my delightful light
I am the flower; you are my essence and fragrance
I am the wind, you are my breath and consciousness
I am the mind, you are my sensual experience
I am the flow of thought; you are my word and deed
I am the intellect, you are my wisdom
I am the consciousness, you are my existence
I am the truth; you are my beauty
I am the man; you are my woman
I am your lover; you are my beloved
I am the soul of bliss; you are my art of love
We are the essence of nature and creation
We are the one absolute existence bliss
Without you I will be no more
Without me you shall be nowhere
Therefore I shine forth as thousand rayed sun
In the azure sky of your heart, while you bloom
Like a thousand petalled lotus in my life of pure bliss!
27-3-2004
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Ode to my Love

Contributed by venkat on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:24:18 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I am the Lord, you are my immutable word
I am the great ego, you are my great illusion
I am the ether, you are my endless vibration
I am the ocean; you aremy waters of creation
I am the sun; you are my brilliant light
I am the fire, you are my burning power
I am the moon; you are my delightful light
I am the flower; you are my essence and fragrance
I am the wind, you are my breath and consciousness
I am the mind, you are my sensual experience
I am the flow of thought; you are my word and deed
I am the intellect, you are my wisdom
I am the consciousness, you are my existence
I am the truth; you are my beauty
I am the man; you are my woman
I am your lover; you are my beloved
I am the soul of bliss; you are my art of love
We are the essence of nature and creation
We are the one absolute existence bliss
Without you I will be no more
Without me you shall be nowhere
Therefore I shine forth as thousand rayed sun
In the azure sky of your heart, while you bloom
Like a thousand petalled lotus in my life of pure bliss!
27-3-2004




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Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:40:21 AM AEST
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Hi, my friend,
this is heavenly beautifull.
great write as always.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:45:44 AM AEST
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beautifully written, absolute, expressed in a flowing sensuous way, and soooo sweet!!!! hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:56:22 AM AEST
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Aww thank you all..in 16 th line there is an error for which I feel very sorry..it may be read as:"I am your lover; you are my beloved"
venkat


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:48:42 AM AEST
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surround by all that beauty, venkat. Who would have ever found that error......not me!
loving, lovely, spectacular!
Enjoye this write very much
consue


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:23:37 AM AEST
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beautiful...you complete each other...wonderful write

Shari


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:38:00 AM AEST
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breathtaking..Well written...Russ


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:27:07 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem. It reminds me of one of my own.


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 11:11:03 AM AEST
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this was so beautiful. flowed so well. wonderfully written. love this.
Arden


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:22:50 PM AEST
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This makes me feel all dreamy.

*Sighs*

I can imagine in my mind having these words read aloud beneath my window pane.

Okay back to reality (LOL) this was one of the most beautiful writes I have read of yours.

Spellbinding... Kie


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:37:11 PM AEST
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Venkat this is beyond words a beautiful piece of art that sends my heart to flutter and my soul to sing lovely
michelle


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:56:33 PM AEST
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Absolutely stunning write, Venkat!!! Truly a beaut!!!

Jenni


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:31:04 PM AEST
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Total love is truly illuminated in this piece. A beautifully penned write, Venkat.

Rita


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:10:51 PM AEST
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Wow what a romantic expressive poem! Awesome write! Its good to hear people still believe in love :)
Anne :D


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:38:32 PM AEST
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yeah well im a piece of poo...naaa naa, lol just kidding, thats very well put together, how long did this take?


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:03:12 AM AEST
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Wow....that was so beautiful, you could create a thousand images simultaneously from reading it...great job as usual.


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 05:12:46 AM AEST
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This is the perfect lovepoem (like so many more you've written). The virtues of two lead to sweet synergy.
Hur


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:28:52 PM AEST
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thats amazing.... i like the symbolism :)


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:50:12 AM AEST
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As always done a beautifully divine poem..K


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 02:39:50 AM AEST
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How your wife must be floating on a sea of pure bliss knowing the love that you pour for her in such a beautiful poem ... tears fill my eyes at the beauty you have written ... Jan


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:51:14 AM AEST
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art at its finest.

wildej


Re: Ode to my Love (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:18:08 AM AEST
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This was absolutely beautiful!! To be loved like this is every woman's fantasy! I would like to write with as much depth, emotion and eloquence as you someday. I don't think I will ever attain that status, but it's not going to stop me from trying! As always, I just loved this! TY for sharing your inner beauty with us.Write on venkat!
Thumps ; 0 )




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