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Array ( [sid] => 4049 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => lost love [time] => 2002-09-19 21:25:05 [hometext] => Just coming out of a loving relationship when the other person has found closure and the other has not is to me a horrible feelin. [bodytext] => Not speaking to you helps me
putting up with it kills me.
and when we rarely speak the clock goes back and we are together again,
so natural are those vibes, the flow
as though,
it were yesterday again - you know?

the things we should have left unsaid
and walked away and left instead
of rubbing salt on all those open sores and wounds
we should have left to heal.

Your back on your doorstep, Im back on the drink
when your babes are asleep and you have time to think
you cant deny THAT thing we had isnt still there.
You cant, you cant, you cant, you swear
that you dont love me anymore!!

I just want to hold you, pull your head into my chest
to smell your hair and feel your breast
beat, fast.
I wont forget and I wont let go
of that feeling we had and I will show,
one day to you how wrong you were to say its through

I promise you I will be there, for you no doubt
you can rely just shout my name,
my heart, my life Id give for us
to live as it should be
and if you don't there'll be no blame

I will love you just the same

and forever [comments] => 5 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 22 [informant] => protonbomb [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
lost love

Contributed by protonbomb on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 09:25:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Not speaking to you helps me
putting up with it kills me.
and when we rarely speak the clock goes back and we are together again,
so natural are those vibes, the flow
as though,
it were yesterday again - you know?

the things we should have left unsaid
and walked away and left instead
of rubbing salt on all those open sores and wounds
we should have left to heal.

Your back on your doorstep, Im back on the drink
when your babes are asleep and you have time to think
you cant deny THAT thing we had isnt still there.
You cant, you cant, you cant, you swear
that you dont love me anymore!!

I just want to hold you, pull your head into my chest
to smell your hair and feel your breast
beat, fast.
I wont forget and I wont let go
of that feeling we had and I will show,
one day to you how wrong you were to say its through

I promise you I will be there, for you no doubt
you can rely just shout my name,
my heart, my life Id give for us
to live as it should be
and if you don't there'll be no blame

I will love you just the same

and forever




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Re: lost love (User Rating: 1 )
by aernby on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 11:22:44 PM AEST
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ouch, i resemble that --

your poem rings true to my experience --

it is also well-crafted

good write!

aern +


Re: lost love (User Rating: 1 )
by protonbomb on Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 01:39:07 AM AEST
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Thanks - how long does this pain last??


Re: lost love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 04:38:08 AM AEST
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Wow... this is a really good piece. And it shows how much you really love the other person... thought I was gonna tear up. Keep writting... you do it well. -Jason


Re: lost love (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 04:39:26 AM AEST
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Long enough to let you know you are alive enough to hurt..but not too long that it kills you.
Keep your spirits up....being hurt..well it hurts. But as with any wound..you will heal..slowly ..but you will. There will most likely always be a scar..but a scar will always hurt less then the open wound. Good luck to you


Re: lost love (User Rating: 1 )
by protonbomb on Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 04:42:19 AM AEST
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thanks Lia for the kind words. I just feel like I want to fast forward my like but I suppose its 'character building' and we have to go through it.

Thanks again




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