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Array ( [sid] => 40736 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fading Away [time] => 2004-03-28 23:43:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Fading Away

Nothing can take away from me
The feelings of today
Not even depression stayed
It faded away
But while nothing can take
These feelings of today
Tomorrow can take today away
And I know that depression will
Reign supreme against me

And I can't stand another day
Of being under control
And I can't stand another day
Of waiting to fade away
And I can't stand another day
I won't stand another day
This feeling is being taken away
By tomorrow's day
And depression takes me within
Another time to be a slave
To the feelings that reign

Nothing can take these feelings away
But tomorrow's day take's today
Nothing turned to everything
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Fading Away

Contributed by essentially9 on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:43:52 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Fading Away

Nothing can take away from me
The feelings of today
Not even depression stayed
It faded away
But while nothing can take
These feelings of today
Tomorrow can take today away
And I know that depression will
Reign supreme against me

And I can't stand another day
Of being under control
And I can't stand another day
Of waiting to fade away
And I can't stand another day
I won't stand another day
This feeling is being taken away
By tomorrow's day
And depression takes me within
Another time to be a slave
To the feelings that reign

Nothing can take these feelings away
But tomorrow's day take's today
Nothing turned to everything
In a second

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2004-03-28 23:43:52]
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Re: Fading Away (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:38:27 AM AEST
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Wow great write!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: Fading Away (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 01:30:01 PM AEST
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Very good write..I loved the style used here.
Each stanza stood out on it's own..Another plus to your poems.

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