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Array ( [sid] => 40746 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So Amazing To Me [time] => 2004-03-29 00:43:33 [hometext] => My first song lyric... although I think many of my poems could be... let me know what u think... always enjoy reading ur comments... is there anyone out there who could set this to music for me? [bodytext] => It's always the same... each time I'm with you
I can sit for hours gazing into your beautiful eyes so blue...
Into the millions of dreams I find hidden deep inside
Scattered beneath all the lies...
I find that you've been building your dreams... block by block
Only to find them tumbling down... one by one
Crumbling to the ground...
Into a sea of teardrops... you cry when there's no one around

Babe... you're so amazing...
So amazing to me...
Oh... can't you see... just how... amazing you are
You seem to be so strong... so sure of yourself
In all that you do... in all that you say
Even when you've been faced with defeat for so long
You're so amazing...
So amazing to me
Even in the way that you walk... even in the way that you talk
You're so amazing...
So amazing to me

Sometimes you feel one emotion comes tumbling after another
Crowding your thoughts as you ponder...
All of the troubling deeds done in your life...
Within the depths of your soul
As your dreams all fall shattered to the ground
You just pick up the broken pieces scattered all around

Babe... you're so amazing...
So amazing to me...
Oh... can't you see... just how... amazing you are
You seem to be so strong... so sure of yourself
In all that you do... in all that you say
Even when you've been faced with defeat for so long
You're so amazing...
So amazing to me
Even in the way that you walk... even in the way that you talk
You're so amazing...
So amazing to me

But there are times when you find yourself with a heavy heart
Tenderly reaching out for the love of another
That you can wrap your arms about...
Only to find an empty space with nothing to grasp onto
Because you've misjudged the distance between the two hearts
You find yourself headed for a fall...
Head over heels straight to the ground...
When there's no one around...
To catch you in their arms...
To keep you safe and warm

Babe... you're so amazing...
So amazing to me...
Oh... can't you see... just how... amazing you are
You seem to be so strong... so sure of yourself
In all that you do... in all that you say
Even when you've been faced with defeat for so long
You're so amazing...
So amazing to me
Even in the way that you walk... even in the way that you talk
You're so amazing...
So amazing to me

'Cause that's how God made you to be
To pick yourself up after defeat
Dust yourself off... get on with your life
Never look back... never think twice
Never remembering all the troubles that plagued your life

Babe... so amazing...
You're so amazing...
So amazing to me...

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So Amazing To Me

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:43:33 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



It's always the same... each time I'm with you
I can sit for hours gazing into your beautiful eyes so blue...
Into the millions of dreams I find hidden deep inside
Scattered beneath all the lies...
I find that you've been building your dreams... block by block
Only to find them tumbling down... one by one
Crumbling to the ground...
Into a sea of teardrops... you cry when there's no one around

Babe... you're so amazing...
So amazing to me...
Oh... can't you see... just how... amazing you are
You seem to be so strong... so sure of yourself
In all that you do... in all that you say
Even when you've been faced with defeat for so long
You're so amazing...
So amazing to me
Even in the way that you walk... even in the way that you talk
You're so amazing...
So amazing to me

Sometimes you feel one emotion comes tumbling after another
Crowding your thoughts as you ponder...
All of the troubling deeds done in your life...
Within the depths of your soul
As your dreams all fall shattered to the ground
You just pick up the broken pieces scattered all around

Babe... you're so amazing...
So amazing to me...
Oh... can't you see... just how... amazing you are
You seem to be so strong... so sure of yourself
In all that you do... in all that you say
Even when you've been faced with defeat for so long
You're so amazing...
So amazing to me
Even in the way that you walk... even in the way that you talk
You're so amazing...
So amazing to me

But there are times when you find yourself with a heavy heart
Tenderly reaching out for the love of another
That you can wrap your arms about...
Only to find an empty space with nothing to grasp onto
Because you've misjudged the distance between the two hearts
You find yourself headed for a fall...
Head over heels straight to the ground...
When there's no one around...
To catch you in their arms...
To keep you safe and warm

Babe... you're so amazing...
So amazing to me...
Oh... can't you see... just how... amazing you are
You seem to be so strong... so sure of yourself
In all that you do... in all that you say
Even when you've been faced with defeat for so long
You're so amazing...
So amazing to me
Even in the way that you walk... even in the way that you talk
You're so amazing...
So amazing to me

'Cause that's how God made you to be
To pick yourself up after defeat
Dust yourself off... get on with your life
Never look back... never think twice
Never remembering all the troubles that plagued your life

Babe... so amazing...
You're so amazing...
So amazing to me...





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Re: So Amazing To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:24:19 AM AEST
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VERY IMPRESSIVE PIECE! LIKE A SWEET BALLAD,ABOUT TO BURST!! WHO EVER CAN PUT MUSIC TO IT-BESIDES A HEARTBEAT OR TWO,WILL HAVE A GREAT SONG!!! BEAUTIFUL IN OTHER WORDS!!!!
DAN!!!!!


Re: So Amazing To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:45:46 AM AEST
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Impressive indeed....I can imagine this starting out as a ballad and then progressing into a slow-rock song or something of that sort.


Re: So Amazing To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:00:55 AM AEST
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lol your going to HATE my comment... lol i could see this being like set to some really loud hard music with strong drums and GREAT guitar and bass sounds... and being SCREAMED! but maybe thats just cause i love that kind of music.... very well written :)


Re: So Amazing To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Mortis-Dark on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:54:45 AM AEST
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This song sounds like something His Infernal Majesty would write. Also known as H.I.M. You could set it to a picking of drop d, with a d and c chord and just set the tempo to a slow moderate pace. It gives me the feeling of a song called Ressurection. Maybe a soft snare and a single kicker. Kick distorsion in on the second verse and your set. Wonderfull write.

Sincerely,
(V)ortis-Dark


Re: So Amazing To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 05:57:23 AM AEST
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For a first song you have written a gem ... these words are so heartfelt ... great write ... Jan




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