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Her blue child rocked
In her warm embrace
Swarming with life

Shining Source
Young green draws on
Her unfailing ardor
To feed its hunger

Beaming Belly Dancer
All of you bask
In her golden veil
That paints your beauty

Warming Goddess
Her believers
Gather in her ardent church
Finding comfort

Yet no envy
In the dark
Only a weak infusion
Of her face

I am the Dark Side
Of her light
I am the inside
Of her out

I am the Dark Lady
In my dim castle
Guarded by the stars
Lodge the creatures of the Night

I am your Dark Companion
In hidden musings
And private wanderings
That cannot bear the light

I am the Dark Reflection
Of your good intentions
Your upright truth
And your clear conscience

I am the true Goddess
In public reviled, but in secret worshipped
For I alone reveal
The true sense of Life [comments] => 9 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Hurretje [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

I, Moon

Contributed by Hurretje on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:09:05 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Radiant Mother
Her blue child rocked
In her warm embrace
Swarming with life

Shining Source
Young green draws on
Her unfailing ardor
To feed its hunger

Beaming Belly Dancer
All of you bask
In her golden veil
That paints your beauty

Warming Goddess
Her believers
Gather in her ardent church
Finding comfort

Yet no envy
In the dark
Only a weak infusion
Of her face

I am the Dark Side
Of her light
I am the inside
Of her out

I am the Dark Lady
In my dim castle
Guarded by the stars
Lodge the creatures of the Night

I am your Dark Companion
In hidden musings
And private wanderings
That cannot bear the light

I am the Dark Reflection
Of your good intentions
Your upright truth
And your clear conscience

I am the true Goddess
In public reviled, but in secret worshipped
For I alone reveal
The true sense of Life

Copyright © Hurretje ... [ 2004-03-29 06:09:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I, Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:33:19 AM AEST
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I never revile a woman or a goddess, whether she is dark or golden..to me she is mother of universe..she cradled me in her arms..blessed me immortal knowledge..
made me lord of her universe.This poem of you is very sweet to me. welldone. venkat

Re: I, Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:49:29 AM AEST
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Awesome Write
Loved It....I Enjoyed Every Word
Your Talent Really Shows..
Keep Up The Great Work....
,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Re: I, Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:22:16 AM AEST
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WoW wonderful described poem!! I love this type of poems! And I love the moon! Awesome write!!
Anne :D:D

Re: I, Moon (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:36:27 AM AEST
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awesome and beautiful..

Re: I, Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:30:33 AM AEST
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A true masterpiece in my mind, what an imagination :)

Re: I, Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:57:06 PM AEST
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im speechless. i simply love your poetry its just so beautiful. you have a great talent.
Arden

Re: I, Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:11:16 PM AEST
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This is an excellent dark write. I loved it. *S* Cynthia

Re: I, Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 10:00:04 AM AEST
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Your writing has a fascinating and otherworldly quality to it.
Stitch

Re: I, Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 03:49:49 AM AEST
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you're writing style(as i'm sure i've said before) is so unique, i truly do enjoy reading your work.

wildejohnny.

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