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The dogs of sin lie
As doth the sun of silent gloom
Alone as whispered winds speak
To a tortured soul through a sunlit room

Along the mountain path
Trodden by countless foes
Eagles soar above a face
Of earthly depths and woes

A child weeps sweet tears of life
While mother entertains thoughts so bitter
Father gone with no goodbye
Abandoned house of memories whither

Upon a shore with night so quiet
As moonlight rests upon stars so bright
A princess in the mind of demons
To rest in bloodied light

Undying love to those that fight
Beyond unwavering stone
To tame the wildest horses nature
With this I shall atone

You my love shine in that room
Such hurt is in your soul
Your home a haunted place of shadows
Has taken such a toll

So many cut with razor blades
For I held your heart too close
When I should've been the one to give
My life to you the most

For you are and always will be my saviour
forevermore..my dearest angel
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My Saviour

Contributed by silent on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:19:49 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The dogs of sin lie
As doth the sun of silent gloom
Alone as whispered winds speak
To a tortured soul through a sunlit room

Along the mountain path
Trodden by countless foes
Eagles soar above a face
Of earthly depths and woes

A child weeps sweet tears of life
While mother entertains thoughts so bitter
Father gone with no goodbye
Abandoned house of memories whither

Upon a shore with night so quiet
As moonlight rests upon stars so bright
A princess in the mind of demons
To rest in bloodied light

Undying love to those that fight
Beyond unwavering stone
To tame the wildest horses nature
With this I shall atone

You my love shine in that room
Such hurt is in your soul
Your home a haunted place of shadows
Has taken such a toll

So many cut with razor blades
For I held your heart too close
When I should've been the one to give
My life to you the most

For you are and always will be my saviour
forevermore..my dearest angel

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Re: My Saviour (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:34:06 AM AEST
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The depths from which one can dig love from. Very good write, that's haunting as well.
Hur

Re: My Saviour (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:29:50 PM AEST
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Whoever ur angel is... I hope she knows just how u feel about her... this is a beautiful way to say thank u... love u... at the same time. Haunting... yet sweet. Be sure though that u let ur angel know just how u feel...
~Donna~

Re: My Saviour (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:52:52 PM AEST
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i really love this poem, have you been seeing into my life? thats how i feel reading this, like 90% is a sad reminder to me of many things; from a viewpoint non personal i see it as an excellent captivating enchanting etheral write, it draws one in and leaves them wanting more, hugs n' love, nessa

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Re: My Saviour (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:33:00 AM AEST
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Your angel is blessed if you love her so much ... your words touched me deeply more than you know ... Jan

Re: My Saviour (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:38:49 AM AEST
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Sweet, sad, touching---full of the deepest pains of life.
Stitch

Re: My Saviour (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:58:03 AM AEST
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I Think This Would Touch Anyones Heart
This Is So Sweet,Loving,And Haunting.
At The Same Time...Very Beautiful..
Great Awesome Write...
Hope She Knows Just How Much You Really Care For Her....
,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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