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Array ( [sid] => 40800 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Todays My Day! [time] => 2004-03-29 13:17:50 [hometext] => Yes, yet another suicide note! [bodytext] => The taste is sour,
in my mouth,
"today's my day",
i have no doubt!

my brain is swollen,
in my skull,
and life around,
just looks soo dull.

yesterday,
just mashed me up,
my life is !
it made me erupt!

now i know,
"todays my day",
everything sucks,
and won't go away!

engraved in marks/scars,
on my skin,
are my self-harm marks,
it's my self-harm sin!

and when you find this,
i don't care!
as long as you don't find this,
before i DISAPPEAR!

and when you find me,
screem! if you must,
bury me in the shadows,
or turn me to dust!

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 36 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => .....edited by mod_6 for language...29-03-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Todays My Day!

Contributed by deathdrop on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:17:50 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The taste is sour,
in my mouth,
"today's my day",
i have no doubt!

my brain is swollen,
in my skull,
and life around,
just looks soo dull.

yesterday,
just mashed me up,
my life is !
it made me erupt!

now i know,
"todays my day",
everything sucks,
and won't go away!

engraved in marks/scars,
on my skin,
are my self-harm marks,
it's my self-harm sin!

and when you find this,
i don't care!
as long as you don't find this,
before i DISAPPEAR!

and when you find me,
screem! if you must,
bury me in the shadows,
or turn me to dust!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-03-29 13:17:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Todays My Day! (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:19:52 PM AEST
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Dark, but well-written! I hope you find a way out of this.
Hur

Re: Todays My Day! (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:22:07 PM AEST
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i like the last two lines... i hope u cheer up tho :)

Re: Todays My Day! (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:31:33 PM AEST
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whoa dark and deep. awesome. i like this alot keep it up.
Arden

Re: Todays My Day! (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:37:35 PM AEST
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It's a shame that part of your poem has been erased. Part of the message isn't spread like that.
Hur

Re: Todays My Day! (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:38:53 PM AEST
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oh this is ever so sad, your poem is full of emotion and very sad its a gift to be able to tap into somones emotions like this but id love to see somthing happy from you. great write.

Re: Todays My Day! (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:30:29 PM AEST
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awesome write. I too liked the last two lines, but overall the poem was great. I look forward to reading more from you

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