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Sweet Love
Contributed by
Corruptor
on
Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 09:56:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Youre so far away from me
growing, living, laughing
without me.
(Funny how, when in love, even a meter
is a mile too far.)
All I can do is sit here as I feel
the sweetest wine
drip onto my pierced with Cupids arrows heart.
I feel the wine drug me and the muse who sleeps in my heart.
Shes woken up by my pain and with her tongue
loosened up, she seduces my mind by whispering in my ear
or worlds created only for you and me,
worlds created by the warmth of your smile,
the gravity of your heart which pulls in and purifies all
with your love.
As the dipped in your love arrows jagged edges
plant themselves deeper into my heart
I smile
as more of you enters my heart and your gravity
grabs me and pulls me into
bliss.
Copyright ©
Corruptor
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2002-09-20 21:56:52]
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Re: Sweet Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on
Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 10:17:26 PM AEST
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An excellent piece, beautiful and stirring..
Chrissie |
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Re: Sweet Love
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by addie on
Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 10:21:20 PM AEST
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amazing write .. keep it up...
take care addie |
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Re: Sweet Love
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 10:49:29 AM AEST
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Stunning write, Chrissie....It's been a while...
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Re: Sweet Love
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by fancyface4898 on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 11:34:03 PM AEST
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| Very well written THank you for sharing |
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