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Array ( [sid] => 40836 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Threshold [time] => 2004-03-29 17:35:18 [hometext] => A poem I wrote with a friend... [bodytext] => Our ardent, fevered loins join to dance the erotic movements
Of somatic intercommunication
Twirling, spinning and pirhouetting in a furious love tango
Tongue tips move over uncovered flesh licking, nibbling, begging for more
Sucking salaciously, slippery with saliva and sweat
We solemnly sigh songs of seduction
Legs tangle in blankets, kisses become longer
As hands make discoveries in places damp with the longing of sweet release

"Hurry up!" one of us moans
As anticipation overpowers our trembling bodies
The passion pounding and pulsating
Breathing becomes shallower as our bodies lock together
Movements are more deliberate; each one designed to bring us closer to rapture
Clothing and words cast aside, primal desire takes over
As we scream like lustful cavemen banshee animals

The sighs and moans escaping our lips and the hungry gleam in our eyes
Say more than words ever possibly could
You pounce on me, the excitement unbearable
Ready to take the moment to new heights of bliss
Moving as if on a track our bodies seamlessly combine
Pulling and pushing at each other but never becoming detached

Undulating gently, like a sail in a light summer breeze
But as the winds gather strength
Boat starts a-rockin', harder and harder
Thresholds are exceeded as our bodies reach complete ecstacy together
Riding the waves of pure bliss we reach the culmination of our love-making

Exhausted and exhiliarated, we collapse in a mound of sensual satisfaction
Our hot nude bodies perfectly entwined [comments] => 1 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 2 [informant] => LeePeter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 95 [ratings] => 19 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Threshold

Contributed by LeePeter on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 05:35:18 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Our ardent, fevered loins join to dance the erotic movements
Of somatic intercommunication
Twirling, spinning and pirhouetting in a furious love tango
Tongue tips move over uncovered flesh licking, nibbling, begging for more
Sucking salaciously, slippery with saliva and sweat
We solemnly sigh songs of seduction
Legs tangle in blankets, kisses become longer
As hands make discoveries in places damp with the longing of sweet release

"Hurry up!" one of us moans
As anticipation overpowers our trembling bodies
The passion pounding and pulsating
Breathing becomes shallower as our bodies lock together
Movements are more deliberate; each one designed to bring us closer to rapture
Clothing and words cast aside, primal desire takes over
As we scream like lustful cavemen banshee animals

The sighs and moans escaping our lips and the hungry gleam in our eyes
Say more than words ever possibly could
You pounce on me, the excitement unbearable
Ready to take the moment to new heights of bliss
Moving as if on a track our bodies seamlessly combine
Pulling and pushing at each other but never becoming detached

Undulating gently, like a sail in a light summer breeze
But as the winds gather strength
Boat starts a-rockin', harder and harder
Thresholds are exceeded as our bodies reach complete ecstacy together
Riding the waves of pure bliss we reach the culmination of our love-making

Exhausted and exhiliarated, we collapse in a mound of sensual satisfaction
Our hot nude bodies perfectly entwined




Copyright © LeePeter ... [ 2004-03-29 17:35:18]
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Re: Threshold (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:18:22 PM AEST
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WoW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very Romantic
Great Write....Keep Em Coming.....
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,,




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