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Array ( [sid] => 40997 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dear Rose [time] => 2004-03-30 15:06:53 [hometext] => I hope that you'll read this Rose... [bodytext] => so resolute and strong-willed
or so you seemed to be
but fickle stakes a base down
when pricked that's what you bleed
i've wished to taken part of
i'll wish to settle in
but wishing clouds the judgement
this heaven more could have been

the composition's still muddled
the song won't have it's place
and anger clouds the judgement
in resolve it paints your face
a reminder of the time passed
a remainder left within
i'll wish to take a part of
i've wished to settle in

try to call it love that's requited
try to change the background scenery
try to take a place when uninvited
try to win you over again to my heart...

in ache the day will be spent
yours is yours and mine is mine
i'll cross your path eventually
we could catch upon the given time
but without you nights are lonely
the days flutter through so plain
while you've never been the center
you've gone away it's not the same

try to call it love that's requited
try to change the pace of scenery
try to take place still uninvited
try to when you won't have my heart...

should i quit trying?
please... tell... me...
is it time i'm wasting?
tell... me... please...
am i overcomplicating?
please...

try to call it love that's requited
try to announce action on the scene
try to place a hold never invited
try to step aback this stubborn heart...

for what am i trying?
please... tell.. me...
is my time spent wasting?
tell... me... please...
should i be complicating?
please...

tell me please...

please

I should have written this months ago, but I never thought the love was lost till now. So for now I plead and beg, hoping that you'll answer and praying for something... [comments] => 9 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 22 [informant] => remy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Dear Rose

Contributed by remy on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:06:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



so resolute and strong-willed
or so you seemed to be
but fickle stakes a base down
when pricked that's what you bleed
i've wished to taken part of
i'll wish to settle in
but wishing clouds the judgement
this heaven more could have been

the composition's still muddled
the song won't have it's place
and anger clouds the judgement
in resolve it paints your face
a reminder of the time passed
a remainder left within
i'll wish to take a part of
i've wished to settle in

try to call it love that's requited
try to change the background scenery
try to take a place when uninvited
try to win you over again to my heart...

in ache the day will be spent
yours is yours and mine is mine
i'll cross your path eventually
we could catch upon the given time
but without you nights are lonely
the days flutter through so plain
while you've never been the center
you've gone away it's not the same

try to call it love that's requited
try to change the pace of scenery
try to take place still uninvited
try to when you won't have my heart...

should i quit trying?
please... tell... me...
is it time i'm wasting?
tell... me... please...
am i overcomplicating?
please...

try to call it love that's requited
try to announce action on the scene
try to place a hold never invited
try to step aback this stubborn heart...

for what am i trying?
please... tell.. me...
is my time spent wasting?
tell... me... please...
should i be complicating?
please...

tell me please...

please

I should have written this months ago, but I never thought the love was lost till now. So for now I plead and beg, hoping that you'll answer and praying for something...




Copyright © remy ... [ 2004-03-30 15:06:53]
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Re: Dear Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:30:37 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, and I hope that you and Rose can find what was lost... I hope she loves this poem...

*J*


Re: Dear Rose (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:28:03 PM AEST
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Wow man...this is beautiful... I hope Rose feels the same as you... Good luck!
-WWD


Re: Dear Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:57:59 PM AEST
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this is beautiful and sad... im sorry about you lost... hopefully things will change you and you can regain your love.... stay strong :)


Re: Dear Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:59:30 PM AEST
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Damn it, why did you have to make ME cry now? I hope she reads it too. *(((hugs)))*

Dani



Re: Dear Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:42:53 PM AEST
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You've laid your feelings bare in this beautiful poem and I truly hope Rose answers your call ... Jan


Re: Dear Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:02:06 PM AEST
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oh my god im about to cry now lol
this was just beautiful and so very sad. i loved this one. well written. awesome job.
Arden


Re: Dear Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:36:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful words from your heart here, Remy. I do hope it works out for you. I know many women want to be loved like this. She is lucky, I just hope she realizes it.

Rainbows,
Rita


Re: Dear Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:25:05 PM AEST
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Dear Remy,
I'm sorry for you and your heart! She can't possibly turn you down after this beautiful poem......but I would also like to say.....don't go on being hurt if No is what she has to say!
Remy, you are very kind, and sensitive soul. Easily hurt, and other know......find someone else, don't let Rose continue to hurt you please. There's another one out there just waiting for you so she can please.
Lovely begging and humble poem
love consue


Re: Dear Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:47:39 PM AEST
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Remy, what a heart felt write. It's so sad. I hope you will be able to find your Rose again. Keep your head held high my friend. Love will always win out in the end. *S* Cynthia




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