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like sitting and drifting alone in the sea
Waiting for you you to resuce me
Time has taken a toll on me
Time can go fast and Time can go slow
while you sit and wait for someone to show
Time is of the essence while you wait to grow
and you want time to slow as you grow old
Time is the enemy as seen by the lines on your face
Time is the enemy as you walk around and pace
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time

Contributed by scott1097 on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:23:48 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Time has taken a toll on me
like sitting and drifting alone in the sea
Waiting for you you to resuce me
Time has taken a toll on me
Time can go fast and Time can go slow
while you sit and wait for someone to show
Time is of the essence while you wait to grow
and you want time to slow as you grow old
Time is the enemy as seen by the lines on your face
Time is the enemy as you walk around and pace
Oh Lord Time has taken its toll on me

Copyright © scott1097 ... [ 2004-03-31 12:23:48]
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Re: time (User Rating: 1 )
by moon_light on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:38:56 PM AEST
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this is a good exspreshon of the humen struggle a genst time.
love
moon light

Re: time (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:45:10 PM AEST
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your poem is so so true.... :) nice work

Re: time (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:06:30 PM AEST
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Time can go fast and Time can go slow
While you sit and wait for someone to show...
Is Very True Hun....But Hopefully We Won't
Have To Wait Much Longer To Be Together..
I Need You Baby In My Life...Great Write Hun
With All My LoVe
,,,,,,,,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Re: time (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 04:53:35 PM AEST
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i love time poetry, well done:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: time (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 05:04:18 PM AEST
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Time is a universal foe, and maybe you don't know what it means now, but some day you will... or, at least, that's all you can hope for. But enjoy the time you have now, it sounds like there is someone waiting to spend it with you...

*J*

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