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Array ( [sid] => 4126 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm looking for him. [time] => 2002-09-22 10:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => His passion is fearce,yet gentle like mine
and never decreases each time we entwine.
Starving his hunger yet sharing his hope,
another year over another to cope.
i'm looking for him.
He's always true and never proceeds
to dampen my day with mistrust or cruel deeds.
he walks on the beach like he's holding my hand
and longs for my shadows reflect on the sand.
im looking for him.
i feel his emptiness,lonely and void,
his feelings are fragile and not to be toyed.
sometimes i mistake him if just for a while,
in somebodys touch or a lost strangers smile.
im looking for him.
maybe i'm crazy believing this fate
but no one i've found can quite compensate.
how can i discribe this presence i miss,
its meaning has more than my first true loves kiss.
im looking for him.
so i shall remain on this path for a while
and follow as always while counting each mile
and if at the end he is still out of view.
i'll rent out a movie and settle for you. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 531 [topic] => 40 [informant] => lynda rachel comiske [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

I'm looking for him.

Contributed by lynda rachel comiske on Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 10:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

His passion is fearce,yet gentle like mine
and never decreases each time we entwine.
Starving his hunger yet sharing his hope,
another year over another to cope.
i'm looking for him.
He's always true and never proceeds
to dampen my day with mistrust or cruel deeds.
he walks on the beach like he's holding my hand
and longs for my shadows reflect on the sand.
im looking for him.
i feel his emptiness,lonely and void,
his feelings are fragile and not to be toyed.
sometimes i mistake him if just for a while,
in somebodys touch or a lost strangers smile.
im looking for him.
maybe i'm crazy believing this fate
but no one i've found can quite compensate.
how can i discribe this presence i miss,
its meaning has more than my first true loves kiss.
im looking for him.
so i shall remain on this path for a while
and follow as always while counting each mile
and if at the end he is still out of view.
i'll rent out a movie and settle for you.

Copyright © lynda rachel comiske ... [ 2002-09-22 10:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I'm looking for him. (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 10:44:40 AM AEST
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Hmmm how I can relate... I wish you luck, if this is a true story write for you. How we each need to find and or looking... and looking....
good write, well written.
Amber Rose :)

Re: I'm looking for him. (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 11:23:08 AM AEST
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I can very much relate to this. Great write.

~ MoonlitAngel

Re: I'm looking for him. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd September 2002 @ 09:00:12 AM AEST
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Thanks Amber, yes its my personal statement..lol and i always end up settling for 2nd best as we all seem to.
Lynda xxx

Re: I'm looking for him. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd September 2002 @ 09:01:37 AM AEST
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Thanks ,Moonlit,
its the story of my life as far as loves concerned.lets hope we all find "him" oneday!,
Lynda xxx

Re: I'm looking for him. (User Rating: 1 )
by boricuacd on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 05:15:03 PM AEST
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good job

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