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Array ( [sid] => 4131 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Happy At Last [time] => 2002-09-22 18:50:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I guess you know now that I am gone.
I hate writing notes but I figured,
I should leave a flight plan,
before my departure.
I thought I was doing everything right
you know, on my best behavior,
staying inside the lines ,
when I tried to color my life
with some sort of self-satisfaction,
without my happiness being too showy.
But then I decided that what I really
wanted was to just go to sleep.
Maybe you will miss me for a while
but like people always tell me
you will get over it.
I know this because of the way people
seem to be able to take me and then
leave me.
Anyway, If you are looking at me now,
notice the grin on my face.
Have you ever seen me this happy?
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 36 [informant] => POOBEAR [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Happy At Last

Contributed by POOBEAR on Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 06:50:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I guess you know now that I am gone.
I hate writing notes but I figured,
I should leave a flight plan,
before my departure.
I thought I was doing everything right
you know, on my best behavior,
staying inside the lines ,
when I tried to color my life
with some sort of self-satisfaction,
without my happiness being too showy.
But then I decided that what I really
wanted was to just go to sleep.
Maybe you will miss me for a while
but like people always tell me
you will get over it.
I know this because of the way people
seem to be able to take me and then
leave me.
Anyway, If you are looking at me now,
notice the grin on my face.
Have you ever seen me this happy?

Copyright © POOBEAR ... [ 2002-09-22 18:50:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Happy At Last (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:05:03 AM AEST
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This is very sad,I find that suicide is a permanent solution to temporary problems.
Just my oppinion.
But when an individual is so at the end of their rope they cannot see the light and want to be happy at any cost.
Your poem was well written.

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