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the beckoning call?
Shall i give up,
and let myself fall?

The sadness within,
it deepens itself.
The anger let out,
feels like fire to my throat.

Strangle me to death,
i dont care!
I'd love to let myself
go in someone else's hands!

In the dead of the night,
i dont want to cry,
becuase underneath it all,
im living a lie. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 337 [topic] => 13 [informant] => srugglingyoungster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Living A Lie

Contributed by srugglingyoungster on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:37:21 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Shall i give into
the beckoning call?
Shall i give up,
and let myself fall?

The sadness within,
it deepens itself.
The anger let out,
feels like fire to my throat.

Strangle me to death,
i dont care!
I'd love to let myself
go in someone else's hands!

In the dead of the night,
i dont want to cry,
becuase underneath it all,
im living a lie.

Copyright © srugglingyoungster ... [ 2004-04-01 23:37:21]
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Re: Living A Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:56:33 PM AEST
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well done, i feel like this myself sometimes. you express your emotions in a very moving and visual intriguing manner.

Re: Living A Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:25:44 PM AEST
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Dear Brittany.
It's known as hopelessness.........but don't you dare give in to it. For tomorrow is another day! A day filled with hope and nice things to come your way!
We live lies, Brittany.......whether we tell them or speak them.....we all tell lies and live them. How hard it is now days to otherwise.....so head hold your head high......knowing that your hope will be fulfilled by and by
Like this poem very much.........you have a way with words.....and your emotions open up wide.......I enjoyed it
Do it again
Lovingcrtters
consue

Re: Living A Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by srugglingyoungster on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 08:37:23 PM AEST
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yes. ive always had a way with words and i always find a ay to make use of them....altough..im just in that stage of life where everything makes sense and im scared to realize it. Im pretty young yet so ill keep writing as ive been. Ill have to post more...havent been on for a couple weeks, yikes!

Re: Living A Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by Evanescencefreak on Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 10:51:20 AM AEST
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this is the first poem i have ever read that i can relate to. I think i know what you mean. Its a good way to put it accross

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