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Array ( [sid] => 4174 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => too long [time] => 2002-09-23 19:20:00 [hometext] => something a little different, to tickle the fancys of people who dont like my usuall style of poetry, worth a look by all. [bodytext] => its been awhile
since ive enjoyed the sun

since i was excited about tomorrow
since i was excited about yesterday

Im figuring out how to turn around
how to start over

its been too long
since ive felt her touch
a feeling i miss a little too much

its been too long
since ive felt the wind hit my face

theres been too much
rain pouring down on my back
too much pain
and too much looking back

too much thinking
and too many drugs
and not nearly enough hugs

more questioning than anything
never knowing what pain
the next day will bring

i hope soon i find which way is up
and i have the courage to never give up [comments] => 3 [counter] => 620 [topic] => 32 [informant] => wil_ca [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

too long

Contributed by wil_ca on Monday, 23rd September 2002 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

its been awhile
since ive enjoyed the sun

since i was excited about tomorrow
since i was excited about yesterday

Im figuring out how to turn around
how to start over

its been too long
since ive felt her touch
a feeling i miss a little too much

its been too long
since ive felt the wind hit my face

theres been too much
rain pouring down on my back
too much pain
and too much looking back

too much thinking
and too many drugs
and not nearly enough hugs

more questioning than anything
never knowing what pain
the next day will bring

i hope soon i find which way is up
and i have the courage to never give up

Copyright © wil_ca ... [ 2002-09-23 19:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: too long (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 01:52:39 PM AEST
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Can never ever get too many hugs....don't give up!!

Re: too long (User Rating: 1 )
by rustygrl33 on Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 05:30:06 PM AEST
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good write- i like it

Re: too long (User Rating: 1 )
by banjo on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 09:17:25 PM AEST
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the random rhyme is distracting. make a decision.

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