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Each and every drop,

Day by day moves on,
I'm still here,

My tears wet my skin,
Silently I cry for you,

Alone and shut out,
Nobody cares,

Gaze out the window,
Locking me in,
Holding me back,
Close my eyes,

Never did i want to leave,
They took me away,
Out of your life,
Keeping me from you,

A menace to society,
That's what they call me,

Filled with dark secrets,
You know they're wrong,

They just wont believe you,
It kills you inside,

Painful and deadly,
My love for you,

Love me and you end up hurt,
Stabbed in the heart,

Too many times I've killed,
Broken souls ripped out hearts,

Only to feed my thirst,
Hungry for men's souls,

That's all a lie,
A carefully constructed lie,

Created to kill me,
When it's killing you,

So I may be crazy,
And if I am who cares,

Never in that way,
I don't want to hurt you,

Cause anyone pain,
Only to myself,

But here I am,
Outside of life,

I shudder with pain,
The corner of my eye twitches,

I can't take it anymore,
Won't take it,

Bang on the door,
Howl amd scream,

Let me out,
Set me free,

But no one will hear me,
Nobody ever does,

Time to go,
Leave forever,

I'm sorry to go,
This is my duty,

To end our pain,
I must die,

Ending my pain,
Happy and slow,

I smile and laugh,
A red essence,

Covering me,
Head to toe,

I slowly slip away,
Your name upon my lips,

My last and final breath,
I scream your name,

Miles away you hear me,
My voice echoes in your head,

Shrill and silent,
Calm and plesant,

At last,
I'm free.

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Deadly Lies

Contributed by TwEeK on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 05:52:32 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

Raining my emotions,
Each and every drop,

Day by day moves on,
I'm still here,

My tears wet my skin,
Silently I cry for you,

Alone and shut out,
Nobody cares,

Gaze out the window,
Locking me in,
Holding me back,
Close my eyes,

Never did i want to leave,
They took me away,
Out of your life,
Keeping me from you,

A menace to society,
That's what they call me,

Filled with dark secrets,
You know they're wrong,

They just wont believe you,
It kills you inside,

Painful and deadly,
My love for you,

Love me and you end up hurt,
Stabbed in the heart,

Too many times I've killed,
Broken souls ripped out hearts,

Only to feed my thirst,
Hungry for men's souls,

That's all a lie,
A carefully constructed lie,

Created to kill me,
When it's killing you,

So I may be crazy,
And if I am who cares,

Never in that way,
I don't want to hurt you,

Cause anyone pain,
Only to myself,

But here I am,
Outside of life,

I shudder with pain,
The corner of my eye twitches,

I can't take it anymore,
Won't take it,

Bang on the door,
Howl amd scream,

Let me out,
Set me free,

But no one will hear me,
Nobody ever does,

Time to go,
Leave forever,

I'm sorry to go,
This is my duty,

To end our pain,
I must die,

Ending my pain,
Happy and slow,

I smile and laugh,
A red essence,

Covering me,
Head to toe,

I slowly slip away,
Your name upon my lips,

My last and final breath,
I scream your name,

Miles away you hear me,
My voice echoes in your head,

Shrill and silent,
Calm and plesant,

At last,
I'm free.

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-04-04 17:52:32]
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Re: Deadly Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:13:29 PM AEST
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Not sure what words to use...
insightful to your frustration,
Picturesque and vivid,
Well done in showing your emotion
Encore.
love,
liquidsunshine
(Chels)

Re: Deadly Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:53:11 PM AEST
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this is amazing, very dark. I enjoyed it a lot.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Deadly Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:35:36 AM AEST
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it's fanastic, but i've heard it somewhere before. Not accusing you, im accusing the other person. Great write. love it

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