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Array ( [sid] => 4181 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MIRROR OF MY SOUL [time] => 2002-09-23 20:30:00 [hometext] => When I wrote this, it was originally meant to be with a center alignment and with the first letter of each line in a diffrent size or in bold, then the secret of the poem may be read. [bodytext] => What I above all have always feared the most
Here I suffer for I found that my heart is now frost
Yet even if I love her with such a burning flame
I am nothing more than a broken guy so lame.
Hitherto even when the world is filled with light
Always I have felt so attracted by the cold night
Verily the light from her sweet eyes is so bright
Ever had she burned my heart with her mere sight
Though never again I shall love none but her
Oh! I know too well, that we'll never be together
Look! That is why my heart silently cries in pain
Only if I knew that all my words are not in vain
Void is this, it doesn't matter how much I love thee
Especially if my love you will never be able to see
Yet perhaps if I had to put and end to all this, maybe,
Oblivion will take this love that was never meant to be.
Until my ravaged heart stops bleeding in her name
Something inside me changed, and she is the one to blame
Only her voice, so kind, can calm my piercing sorrow
Many days had passed and still I can’t reach tomorrow
Utterly wrecked is my soul, if I can’t touch her hand
Can’t you see that only by the memory of her smile I still stand?
How I wanted to be brave to challenge my cursed fate
God, why of all things have you denied me this?
Absolutely beautiful but not as woman but as an angel she is
But bereft of hope and faith, I decided to walk alone
Yet deep inside me I had always known that she is the one
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP) [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
MIRROR OF MY SOUL

Contributed by Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP) on Monday, 23rd September 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



What I above all have always feared the most
Here I suffer for I found that my heart is now frost
Yet even if I love her with such a burning flame
I am nothing more than a broken guy so lame.
Hitherto even when the world is filled with light
Always I have felt so attracted by the cold night
Verily the light from her sweet eyes is so bright
Ever had she burned my heart with her mere sight
Though never again I shall love none but her
Oh! I know too well, that we'll never be together
Look! That is why my heart silently cries in pain
Only if I knew that all my words are not in vain
Void is this, it doesn't matter how much I love thee
Especially if my love you will never be able to see
Yet perhaps if I had to put and end to all this, maybe,
Oblivion will take this love that was never meant to be.
Until my ravaged heart stops bleeding in her name
Something inside me changed, and she is the one to blame
Only her voice, so kind, can calm my piercing sorrow
Many days had passed and still I can’t reach tomorrow
Utterly wrecked is my soul, if I can’t touch her hand
Can’t you see that only by the memory of her smile I still stand?
How I wanted to be brave to challenge my cursed fate
God, why of all things have you denied me this?
Absolutely beautiful but not as woman but as an angel she is
But bereft of hope and faith, I decided to walk alone
Yet deep inside me I had always known that she is the one




Copyright © Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP) ... [ 2002-09-23 20:30:00]
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Re: MIRROR OF MY SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 01:22:17 AM AEST
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Good poem..and just a note to you...if you had put the word Acrostic in ( ) after the title of your poem...Mick would have set it all to the left for ya..that way everyone could read down the left and know what your 'secret' was :)


Re: MIRROR OF MY SOUL (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 10:12:02 PM AEST
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it's so beautiful this poem, eventhough it's quite sad


Re: MIRROR OF MY SOUL (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 10:12:10 PM AEST
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it's so beautiful this poem, eventhough it's quite sad




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