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Array ( [sid] => 41988 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Destroy the Wake of Death [time] => 2004-04-06 09:10:50 [hometext] => Emptiness and numbness are the worst feeling to be had. Yes, numbness is actually a feeling even though it is the absence of feeling. [bodytext] => Empty inside
This space
Feeling the cavity
Echoing are words
Of loved ones
A cave
Of lovely echoes
But yet
A cave
Hollow
Cold
Sickening in the pit
Of heart and stomach
Comfort found
But in lonely slumber
The nothing
Blackness
Seeking to destroy
Brings ease
To the worse
Of waking dead [comments] => 3 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 43 [informant] => desireemiote [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Destroy the Wake of Death

Contributed by desireemiote on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:10:50 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Empty inside
This space
Feeling the cavity
Echoing are words
Of loved ones
A cave
Of lovely echoes
But yet
A cave
Hollow
Cold
Sickening in the pit
Of heart and stomach
Comfort found
But in lonely slumber
The nothing
Blackness
Seeking to destroy
Brings ease
To the worse
Of waking dead

Copyright © desireemiote ... [ 2004-04-06 09:10:50]
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Re: Destroy the Wake of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:49:29 AM AEST
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I love the simplicity of this. Sometimes using a single word means so much more than using a whole bunch. The cave in the pit of the stomach. Oh, I know that feeling too well.
Nice write.
Stitch

Re: Destroy the Wake of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:51:54 AM AEST
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Well said!!! Good write.
Jenni

Re: Destroy the Wake of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Zexen on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:43:08 AM AEST
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Brilliant just plain brilliant in all its simplicity,
you convey the emotions so well.

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