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Array ( [sid] => 42033 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Hunt [time] => 2004-04-06 15:57:27 [hometext] => the hunt is over, well at least it sounds good and true... [bodytext] => settle for today...
the stakes have been thrown to sea
and as the bay runs further away
the chase doesn't even phase me
not today...

i'm through
the hunt is done
i've scored a new song...
so have you
but it was fun
the end has come along...
true.

we stake our paths...
the lengths seems to run around
as each wave crashes down in wrath
the break points so clearly sound
and it lasts...

i'm through
the hunt is gone
i've drafted a new one...
maybe you
that's so wrong
i said that i was done...
soon.

if you're cold all the time
then why do you keep shining in so warm?
now i'm tired, but still wired
connected to you, well is it bad form?
not today...
but soon...

is it through?
the hunt is won
then how is it so wrong...
with you
the wait is long
i'll sing this stupid song...
to you. [comments] => 10 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Remy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
The Hunt

Contributed by Remy on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 03:57:27 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



settle for today...
the stakes have been thrown to sea
and as the bay runs further away
the chase doesn't even phase me
not today...

i'm through
the hunt is done
i've scored a new song...
so have you
but it was fun
the end has come along...
true.

we stake our paths...
the lengths seems to run around
as each wave crashes down in wrath
the break points so clearly sound
and it lasts...

i'm through
the hunt is gone
i've drafted a new one...
maybe you
that's so wrong
i said that i was done...
soon.

if you're cold all the time
then why do you keep shining in so warm?
now i'm tired, but still wired
connected to you, well is it bad form?
not today...
but soon...

is it through?
the hunt is won
then how is it so wrong...
with you
the wait is long
i'll sing this stupid song...
to you.




Copyright © Remy ... [ 2004-04-06 15:57:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Hunt (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:11:08 PM AEST
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awww hun im sorry.... i take it that things arent going so well for you... nice poem :)


Re: The Hunt (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:17:31 PM AEST
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Very good poem. Very powerful. I enjoyed. Nicely done.


Re: The Hunt (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:34:07 PM AEST
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so sad but an excellent write


michelle


Re: The Hunt (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 07:21:20 PM AEST
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It is sad when its over and done. The title really was great for this poem. May you find happiness and soon! Enjoyed this one... Kie


Re: The Hunt (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:18:39 PM AEST
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sad but at the same time it's got hope in it... nice ;)


Re: The Hunt (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:18:06 PM AEST
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Quite a sad write and has a tone of resignation there, but enjoyable to read. Hope things get better for ya.


Re: The Hunt (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:28:12 AM AEST
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Haunting, but beautifully written song.
Go on like this.
Hur


Re: The Hunt (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:05:09 PM AEST
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Awww, what a sad, emotional write Remy. I am so sorry your heart has been broken. *S* Cynthia


Re: The Hunt (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 02:13:45 AM AEST
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interesting... thanks for sharing this one. i like it lots!


Re: The Hunt (User Rating: 1 )
by Juliet on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:58:03 PM AEST
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How sad...... but still very good




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