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But now I cant hide anymore thats for sure!
If only he could feel the pain and the love I have! If I dont ill die and sing low into the ground! Or inlast thats the way I feel. So Yes ill tell him now or forever drown.
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Sick At Heart

Contributed by Thumper0719 on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:29:48 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sick at heart, in many ways, crushed through all these endless days. Yet its not a bad feeling, not at all. No real hurt, or pain in what I feel right now. But no one can no of how I feel because real pain could become real. But should he be told of how I feel or should I hide away until life dosnt see real. Should I hide away from the regection.. or what they will say. Oh should I hide away inside. So that no pain becomes real. So that no hurt I will have to feel. Should I hide away from what people will think or for what iv been longing to say for days!
But now I cant hide anymore thats for sure!
If only he could feel the pain and the love I have! If I dont ill die and sing low into the ground! Or inlast thats the way I feel. So Yes ill tell him now or forever drown.

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Re: Sick At Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by LouisaMontagu on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:01:31 PM AEST
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touching..! alot of pain is inscripted in this piece, i must say it is like no other i have read before, is this your first write?

Luv Louisa x

Re: Sick At Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 07:14:11 PM AEST
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This was a good strong poem that was filled with deep emotion which is always good. The only thing I saw that took away from it was the spelling errors. If they were fixed it would be perfection. You do write well and have alot of depth. Kie

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