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Array ( [sid] => 42234 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Pedestal [time] => 2004-04-07 20:18:50 [hometext] => Written between sobs and pure desperation [bodytext] => Sitting in my chair
Starring out the windowpane
Watching the gloomy clouds dance with fear
Horizontal spears of light
I am in a trance
Recalling you
You on your pedestal
I will never forgot
Your creamy milky skin
White as a ghost
With no blemish
Your belly protruding with life
Enchant me as I wish for your tender plump lips
To once again kiss me tenderly
Your hair dark and flowing in the wind
Eyes so deep and lucid
Your figure so simple
Captivating every sense within me
My soul crying out to touch you once again
Desire for your soul to be intertwined
Latched upon me never to let go
I will never forget
Your feet how they dance in the wind
Never touching the earth
Like an angel from beyond
You soar over me taunting
Laughing at me
Haunting me and my every thought
A thousand tears I have shed for you
You wish death upon me
I have faded never to exist again
Dying in my reformatory
After killing your pedestal
I will never die again
I will never shed a thousand tears no more
Raising the barrel I pull the trigger
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 36 [informant] => williamdye [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Your Pedestal

Contributed by williamdye on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:18:50 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Sitting in my chair
Starring out the windowpane
Watching the gloomy clouds dance with fear
Horizontal spears of light
I am in a trance
Recalling you
You on your pedestal
I will never forgot
Your creamy milky skin
White as a ghost
With no blemish
Your belly protruding with life
Enchant me as I wish for your tender plump lips
To once again kiss me tenderly
Your hair dark and flowing in the wind
Eyes so deep and lucid
Your figure so simple
Captivating every sense within me
My soul crying out to touch you once again
Desire for your soul to be intertwined
Latched upon me never to let go
I will never forget
Your feet how they dance in the wind
Never touching the earth
Like an angel from beyond
You soar over me taunting
Laughing at me
Haunting me and my every thought
A thousand tears I have shed for you
You wish death upon me
I have faded never to exist again
Dying in my reformatory
After killing your pedestal
I will never die again
I will never shed a thousand tears no more
Raising the barrel I pull the trigger




Copyright © williamdye ... [ 2004-04-07 20:18:50]
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Re: Your Pedestal (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:35:38 PM AEST
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i lovethis type of poetry it's always so powerful and meaning, you could not get a happy person to coe along and write somthing as beautiful as this.
Good work

woei Queen


Re: Your Pedestal (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:13:47 AM AEST
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Your poetry has really touched me. You are very talented. Keep writing. I.C. Weiner


Re: Your Pedestal (User Rating: 1 )
by Hoots on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:55:44 PM AEST
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WOW!! I don't know what to say. That was a really good write.
Krystle




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