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Array ( [sid] => 42288 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Not he, not I [time] => 2004-04-08 04:39:43 [hometext] => enjoy this, i dont know what meaning you will get from it as u read. but ur thoughts would be very welcomed. love n hugs XgenX [bodytext] => Sit there staring at him,
Knowing I can never have him.
My staring taken as unhappiness, but if only you knew,
You would be the unhappy one,
Not he, not I.

I love you but I’m not sure of my feelings,
For him!
Your, everything I’ve ever wanted,
Then he came along. Now I’m confused.
I feel the same for you both.

My staring taken as unhappiness, but if only you knew,
You would be the unhappy one,
Not he, not I.

I care so much for both, as if you were one.
This should not be,
You are single people.
But my heart says one.
This is insane,
How can I feel same about you?

My staring taken as unhappiness, but if only you knew,
You would be the unhappy one,
Not he, not I.

This is my word,
I will never hurt either of you,
You’re both part of my world.
That could not be without both,
Of you!
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Not he, not I

Contributed by little_genna on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:39:43 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Sit there staring at him,
Knowing I can never have him.
My staring taken as unhappiness, but if only you knew,
You would be the unhappy one,
Not he, not I.

I love you but I’m not sure of my feelings,
For him!
Your, everything I’ve ever wanted,
Then he came along. Now I’m confused.
I feel the same for you both.

My staring taken as unhappiness, but if only you knew,
You would be the unhappy one,
Not he, not I.

I care so much for both, as if you were one.
This should not be,
You are single people.
But my heart says one.
This is insane,
How can I feel same about you?

My staring taken as unhappiness, but if only you knew,
You would be the unhappy one,
Not he, not I.

This is my word,
I will never hurt either of you,
You’re both part of my world.
That could not be without both,
Of you!

Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2004-04-08 04:39:43]
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Re: Not he, not I (User Rating: 1 )
by forgottensorrow on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:42:31 PM AEST
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Good poem, I like it. It shows the confusion and unhappiness the person would be going through.
.:.Chrissy.:.

Re: Not he, not I (User Rating: 1 )
by gmcse8 on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 03:39:12 PM AEST
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I LIKED THE REPETITION OF PHRASING IN THIS POEM.... GRABS YOU A LITTLE WITH THE FIRST LINE, "sat there staring at him". SAYS IT ALL. SETS UP THE POEM NICELY. ALSO THOUGHT "my staring taken as unhappiness" SAYS A GREAT DEAL WITH VERY FEW WORDS. THE ETERNAL TRIANGLE. ONE DAY YOU WILL HAVE TO TELL ME HOW THIS CAME OUT.......... BOB

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