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2.Spend the money I haven’t earn
3.Cut my hair to please someone
4.Do the things I haven’t done
5.Stop stressing out it doesn’t matter
6.Eat some more so thin gets fatter
7. Love myself despite the hate
8. Catch the fish without the bait
9. Speak some views, drink some booze
10.Get some sleep, watch the news
11. Fall in love, overnight
12.Win a war, lose a fight
13.Get a misused broken heart
14.Make my whole life like an Art
15. Slow down speed up, before I die
16. Laugh and laugh until I cry
17. Face my fears, face the truth
18. Scream out loud, raise the roof
19.Don’t obsess about my health
20. Always try to be myself. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Broken-glass [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

20 things to do...

Contributed by Broken-glass on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:08:59 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

1. Revisit things I never learnt
2.Spend the money I haven’t earn
3.Cut my hair to please someone
4.Do the things I haven’t done
5.Stop stressing out it doesn’t matter
6.Eat some more so thin gets fatter
7. Love myself despite the hate
8. Catch the fish without the bait
9. Speak some views, drink some booze
10.Get some sleep, watch the news
11. Fall in love, overnight
12.Win a war, lose a fight
13.Get a misused broken heart
14.Make my whole life like an Art
15. Slow down speed up, before I die
16. Laugh and laugh until I cry
17. Face my fears, face the truth
18. Scream out loud, raise the roof
19.Don’t obsess about my health
20. Always try to be myself.

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Re: 20 things to do... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:15:51 PM AEST
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THis is a lovely "list poem".. It would have been perfect without the numbers tho...
Jenni

Re: 20 things to do... (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:34:33 PM AEST
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oh what a list, if only more people could think upon things like these... good insightful write! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: 20 things to do... (User Rating: 1 )
by dolly_dagger on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 03:11:23 PM AEST
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i disagree with jenni. i think the numbers help in many ways... including 2 break up the things 2 do and 2 emphasise the list and how it has been written to sound as casual as like a shopping list or something.
xxxx

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