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Array ( [sid] => 42416 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Needs to be alone [time] => 2004-04-09 00:32:13 [hometext] => i have a girl, and she lives so far away, but now i find i feel fulfillment with being alone.... [bodytext] =>

Thought i loved, and love again,
I find that it gips me by the hand,
For month and months felt so great,
No, it can't...this is not what i planned.

For a few days now,
I have felt so different,
Different from what i should,
Lack of the grace i understood

I was so used to being consumed,
I was so comfortable lonely,
Now i feel so confused,
Now i get home, enjoy being alone.

As my heart, will turn black,
Let the knife cut and hack,
To not know how you feel anymore,
Something i hate, felt so often before,

How can i be a man?
How can i have this plan?
Embracing my little black pillow,
Ever so tight again.

Slowly a tear falls,
The night feels so thick,
And as my world caves in on me,
I feel the fulfillment of being alone again [comments] => 2 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Froggy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Needs to be alone

Contributed by Froggy on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:32:13 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Thought i loved, and love again,
I find that it gips me by the hand,
For month and months felt so great,
No, it can't...this is not what i planned.

For a few days now,
I have felt so different,
Different from what i should,
Lack of the grace i understood

I was so used to being consumed,
I was so comfortable lonely,
Now i feel so confused,
Now i get home, enjoy being alone.

As my heart, will turn black,
Let the knife cut and hack,
To not know how you feel anymore,
Something i hate, felt so often before,

How can i be a man?
How can i have this plan?
Embracing my little black pillow,
Ever so tight again.

Slowly a tear falls,
The night feels so thick,
And as my world caves in on me,
I feel the fulfillment of being alone again

Copyright © Froggy ... [ 2004-04-09 00:32:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Needs to be alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Shadow on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:41:34 AM AEST
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Sad. I liked in on so many levels and i am the fist to write on it. I love it and hope you will keep it coming.

Re: Needs to be alone (User Rating: 1 )
by MorbidMongrel on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:04:03 AM AEST
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I can definately relate to this poem. I've been there on numerous occasions, times when I've just wanted to shut out the world and be by myself. Definately nothing wrong with it... Everyone needs some time for themselves.

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