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I hate myself
I just wish
I didn't feel,
Such anguish
If I just wasn't
That's all
Just not

Not tall
Not me
Not who I am
Or who I'll be
If there was something
I could do
To be someone
No one knew
I would do it
In an instsnt
But there's no answer
To my problem
I really hate
This stupid system
If you're mean
You have "friends"
And if you're nice
You're a loser

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The System of Who You 'Are'

Contributed by 6_2 on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 07:40:53 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Sometimes,
I hate myself
I just wish
I didn't feel,
Such anguish
If I just wasn't
That's all
Just not

Not tall
Not me
Not who I am
Or who I'll be
If there was something
I could do
To be someone
No one knew
I would do it
In an instsnt
But there's no answer
To my problem
I really hate
This stupid system
If you're mean
You have "friends"
And if you're nice
You're a loser

Copyright © 6_2 ... [ 2004-04-09 19:40:53]
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Re: The System of Who You 'Are' (User Rating: 1 )
by spider on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 07:53:08 PM AEST
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it may be because im tres emotional at this time but this actually wants to make me cry. it hurts to know that sum1 feels how i do.

Re: The System of Who You 'Are' (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 09:13:43 PM AEST
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Very truthful and from the heart. But your the one with friends!!!!!! The rest means nothing but hot air and lies. You the one that perceives! Expand, embrace and feel your true self and your poetry will become a joy.
Good luck

Re: The System of Who You 'Are' (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:17:01 PM AEST
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i gotta say this is great poem, and alot of us feel exsactly how it describes

Re: The System of Who You 'Are' (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:16:56 PM AEST
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great poem

Brandy

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