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A mountain
In da ill illusion
Dat da artist made

U loser!

Everytime i end up high
Wil u b dere 4 me
How wil u care 4 me

& everytime i look at u
Wil u hurt me so
& den just let go plz

Death in a box
Search 4 da crack
Da childhood dayz
Went high
Fallin in da lake

In between
dat ****** ****
I woz
Lighting matches
On ur head

U loser!

Everytime i look my way
Wot wil u take of me
U wana brake in me

& everytime i looking thru
U
I wana let u go
I thought u ought 2 know

Everytime i look my way
U wana waste all me
How wil u stay wit me

& everytime i look 4 ur heart
U run away from me
Wil u marry me

I've fallen down
A mountain
High
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Marry Me

Contributed by persia on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 03:59:24 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

I've fallen down
A mountain
In da ill illusion
Dat da artist made

U loser!

Everytime i end up high
Wil u b dere 4 me
How wil u care 4 me

& everytime i look at u
Wil u hurt me so
& den just let go plz

Death in a box
Search 4 da crack
Da childhood dayz
Went high
Fallin in da lake

In between
dat ****** ****
I woz
Lighting matches
On ur head

U loser!

Everytime i look my way
Wot wil u take of me
U wana brake in me

& everytime i looking thru
U
I wana let u go
I thought u ought 2 know

Everytime i look my way
U wana waste all me
How wil u stay wit me

& everytime i look 4 ur heart
U run away from me
Wil u marry me

I've fallen down
A mountain
High

Copyright © persia ... [ 2004-04-10 15:59:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Marry Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:05:02 PM AEST
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"I woz
Lighting matches
On ur head

U loser!"

haha, that's priceless.... it's amazing to see what people write when they're high! lol

Love it

Re: Marry Me (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:05:46 PM AEST
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good poem. a little strange but nonetheless it is very well wrote.

love and hugs
XgenX

Re: Marry Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:13:49 PM AEST
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nicely done.

Re: Marry Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:22:10 PM AEST
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loved it ! it's amazing what you can write with an altered state of conciousness!

wildejohnny.

Re: Marry Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby1987 on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:24:12 PM AEST
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Damn girl,
This is so true! I remeber wen u were screaming some of what you've written above to Harrison coz he said he liked you- Poor bloke. I hope You've learnt that Drugs are not a game- i have.
And no more experiments okay.

You made Harrison cry!-have you said sorry.

Cool poem anyway

Luv Aaliyah(ruby1987)

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