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Array ( [sid] => 42670 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~*~YoU DoNt UnDeRStAnD~*~ [time] => 2004-04-10 21:35:09 [hometext] => please read this and send me your thoughts [bodytext] => You don't understand why I feel like this,
you don't understand cuz you can't see it.
But at times I know you feel the same way,
But I go through this ***** everyday,
at school Im the funny one who always makes people laugh,
but at home I'm the mysterious one who cuts herself while she gasps.
Every breathe I take is a wound to my heart,
It was a mistake for my life to start.
If I decide to end my life I don't know where I'll go,
besides being buried 6 ft. under ina hole,
I don't know if I'll go to heaven or hell,
My only mistake was being born so I don't know who can tell,
but who cares I'd rather be not breathing than stay in a dark lonely corner in the middle of nowhere! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 6 [informant] => jmt25607 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

~*~YoU DoNt UnDeRStAnD~*~

Contributed by jmt25607 on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 09:35:09 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You don't understand why I feel like this,
you don't understand cuz you can't see it.
But at times I know you feel the same way,
But I go through this ***** everyday,
at school Im the funny one who always makes people laugh,
but at home I'm the mysterious one who cuts herself while she gasps.
Every breathe I take is a wound to my heart,
It was a mistake for my life to start.
If I decide to end my life I don't know where I'll go,
besides being buried 6 ft. under ina hole,
I don't know if I'll go to heaven or hell,
My only mistake was being born so I don't know who can tell,
but who cares I'd rather be not breathing than stay in a dark lonely corner in the middle of nowhere!

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Re: ~*~YoU DoNt UnDeRStAnD~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by LiquidChaos on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:30:01 PM AEST
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i know EXACTLY how you feel. i attempted suicide a few months ago, but i realized that i didn't know where i was going. that's why i dont try again. because honestly, if you commit suicide...who knows what god would say? definately not me. and the cutting...ah yes...everyone tells me to stop but sometimes i just see no reason to..i mean, if it keeps me alive...well...i dont really know what to tell you except hold on and keep writing!! awsome poem!

addie

Re: ~*~YoU DoNt UnDeRStAnD~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 12:43:12 AM AEST
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Ur right... I don't understand... but I know where ur coming from though...
As for where u'll end up... that is in God's hands...
It's thru His grace as to where u'll go after death... There's only 2 choices... Heaven or Hell!! So it's 50/50 chance either way!!!
As for ur only mistake was being born... no u were not a mistake!!! God has a purpose and plan for u... just remember... He loves u... and he doesn't want to see u fall into Satan's traps and lies... b/c that what Satan wants for ur life is to see u fail misably... so do what u hae to to stay alive... the best is yet to come for u... if u can accept urself for who u are... and accept God into ur life...
hope this has helped and that everything will work out for u... if u need to talk PM me...
~Donna~

Re: ~*~YoU DoNt UnDeRStAnD~*~ (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:35:13 AM AEST
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hey,

i understand exactly wat u r going through i have tried to commit suicide 3 times and i cut myself to feel some control over my own life. right now i'm trying really hard to get help. the thing that has really helped me is talking to my friend about my problem, it made me feel that there was someone who really cared. maybe it would help if u talked to someone.

jessica

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