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Array ( [sid] => 4268 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => heartbroken [time] => 2002-09-25 19:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I知 not supposed to feel this way, I really shouldn't care
I知 the one who broke it off, this just isn't fair

I couldn't let him get too close, couldn't care too much
wouldn't let myself fall in love, or anything of such

so why am I upset? why am I just standing still?
I can't let him get to me, but in the end I know I will

I try hard to hide my pain, behind a happy smile
but really I have it tucked away, in a neat emotional file

I can't let anyone know, why it is I feel this way
like I知 being torn apart inside, every single day

I know he doesn't feel the same, he's happy as can be
he's got his new girlfriend, that I can see

so I値l keep it under wraps, how it is I feel inside
upsetting others with it, I just cannot abide

I know that eventually, the pain will go away
and I can just sit, and wait patiently for that day

it can't come soon enough, the day that I await
I know I won't hurt forever, that just isn't my fate

so, I will be patient, I know it'll take a while
my pain will be healed, staying in that neat emotional file

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 22 [informant] => tamsin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
heartbroken

Contributed by tamsin on Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 07:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I知 not supposed to feel this way, I really shouldn't care
I知 the one who broke it off, this just isn't fair

I couldn't let him get too close, couldn't care too much
wouldn't let myself fall in love, or anything of such

so why am I upset? why am I just standing still?
I can't let him get to me, but in the end I know I will

I try hard to hide my pain, behind a happy smile
but really I have it tucked away, in a neat emotional file

I can't let anyone know, why it is I feel this way
like I知 being torn apart inside, every single day

I know he doesn't feel the same, he's happy as can be
he's got his new girlfriend, that I can see

so I値l keep it under wraps, how it is I feel inside
upsetting others with it, I just cannot abide

I know that eventually, the pain will go away
and I can just sit, and wait patiently for that day

it can't come soon enough, the day that I await
I know I won't hurt forever, that just isn't my fate

so, I will be patient, I know it'll take a while
my pain will be healed, staying in that neat emotional file





Copyright ツゥ tamsin ... [ 2002-09-25 19:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: heartbroken (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 08:40:20 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem, tamsin... I feel the longing and the pain..... looking forward to reading more of you..
Jenni




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