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Array ( [sid] => 4275 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => something [time] => 2002-09-26 06:30:00 [hometext] => just get it out [bodytext] => Something hit the cold ground.
*****! just me again.
How could it happen one more time,
I thought we'd become friends.

Something hard knocked me flat.
Damn! I believe it was you.
Does a thousand pathetic sorries
make up for all you do.

Something black has fallen down.
My God! just my heart.
There goes another sweet promise,
another fresh start.

Something angry slammed a door.
Yeah! just my hand.
Look how tall a back can look
when it's allowed to stand. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 6 [informant] => viola [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
something

Contributed by viola on Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Something hit the cold ground.
*****! just me again.
How could it happen one more time,
I thought we'd become friends.

Something hard knocked me flat.
Damn! I believe it was you.
Does a thousand pathetic sorries
make up for all you do.

Something black has fallen down.
My God! just my heart.
There goes another sweet promise,
another fresh start.

Something angry slammed a door.
Yeah! just my hand.
Look how tall a back can look
when it's allowed to stand.




Copyright © viola ... [ 2002-09-26 06:30:00]
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Re: something (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 07:37:19 AM AEST
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Such intense passion...Well described. Nice work.


Re: something (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 07:43:18 AM AEST
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Nice write, Viola.. strong words..
Jenni


Re: something (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 12:34:46 AM AEST
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Believe it or not..this almost brought me to tears. I had what I assumed was a good friendship once..however...it was a one sided friendship and I ended up getting so hurt.....what a powerful poem this is..


Re: something (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 06:15:53 AM AEST
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Excellent write .... I'm going through this too .... it's so hard to stand up though and be firm. Great poem.


Re: something (User Rating: 1 )
by GreenLady89 on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 09:01:14 AM AEST
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I think this poem is something that most people could relate to. Almost everyone has been hurt by someone they care about.




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