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[aid] => mick
[title] => crying voices
[time] => 2004-04-11 14:45:44
[hometext] => don't know how to explain this one. dont think i ended it too well, dont htink it was too good actually. in fact i think it is crap.
[bodytext] => Slide through the door Holding self up on the handle grasp the banister and crawl up the stairs Hear the voices 'you're home! How was your day?' Cant open mouth, so don’t reply Lean on the back of bedroom door Until it closes Twist the key in the lock Sit with head on knees Tears soaking jeans Right hand slowly creeping under the bed The pain finally got too much Now realising that no one should be treated like this No one should have to be silent while day after day they are abused now realising the only one who can end the pain is you right hand now grasping its target withdraws from underneath the bed holding the knife right hand now lowers to left wrist and with one harsh action the knife goes down intense pain as it goes through the usual thresh hold try to hold back the screams but they keep coming hear the metal grinding on bones more tears pour from eyes more screams escape from mouth watch as blood soaks into carpet had no idea it would hurt so much had no idea it would take so long knocking on the door, handle rattling 'are you ok?' stupid question 'what's wrong?' again looking at wrist, pinned to the floor thumping on door getting heavier now moving the body, wrist moving around the blade, stuck firmly in the floor surprising how this pain is still easier to deal with than that inside at least there is reassurance that this will end soon it will all end the screaming stops inside there is silence still the thumping goes crying voices now on the other side of the door crying voices crying voices [comments] => 5 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 36 [informant] => spider [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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