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Array ( [sid] => 42766 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dead Life [time] => 2004-04-11 15:39:21 [hometext] => My sister wrote this, and wanted me to put it up. please read it, she's called dot and she is 9. please tell me what you think so i can give her the 'good', or 'bad' news. obvisously, it's not true! [bodytext] => Dead, as i drop to the ground.
my blood has fled.
my skin has shed.
showing crimson light.
near by people stop and stare, in fright!
but i don't care, because for me,
it is a delight!
because now i'm dead,
it doesn't matter about what will happen in the future.
or when i was smacked around by a teacher.

And here i lay, on my own,
in my 'living dead' zone.

[comments] => 7 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 36 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Dead Life

Contributed by deathdrop on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:39:21 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Dead, as i drop to the ground.
my blood has fled.
my skin has shed.
showing crimson light.
near by people stop and stare, in fright!
but i don't care, because for me,
it is a delight!
because now i'm dead,
it doesn't matter about what will happen in the future.
or when i was smacked around by a teacher.

And here i lay, on my own,
in my 'living dead' zone.

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-04-11 15:39:21]
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Re: Dead Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Queen_Dolly on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:52:13 PM AEST
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This is very good, your sister has a talent, and at 9 years old plenty of time to increase that talent =)
Hopefully we'll see Dot on here some day.
Tell her it's beautiful.

Queen_Dolly

Re: Dead Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Thumper0719 on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:54:53 PM AEST
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Hey, it really good! She should make an account.

Re: Dead Life (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:00:02 PM AEST
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Re: Dead Life (User Rating: 1)
by Happiness on Sunday, April 11 2004 @ 15:43:20 CDT
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Good news:
You can tell your sister that "Happiness" said she did a splendid job.
At the tender age of 9 she has truly shined with this wonderful write.
In my humble opinion, your little sister shows great promise.

Jarred.

Re: Dead Life (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:10:07 PM AEST
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Tell her it's great... she's got lots of potenial there...hope to see her on here one day soon...
~Donna~

Re: Dead Life (User Rating: 1 )
by AmaNdAsHepArD on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:35:30 PM AEST
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WOW!!i cant beleive a 9 year old wrote this tell your sister she is a great poet and should keep writing......lots of potenital cant wait to read more from her
**vamp**

Re: Dead Life (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:45:43 PM AEST
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Woah! Tell 'er it's REALLY good! Uh, I'm a bit worried that she's feeling this stuff at age 9, but the poem's wonderful!

Re: Dead Life (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:37:04 AM AEST
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the beginnings of a great poet! a fantastic write. Pass on my best wishes for the future and tell her to continue with her talent!

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