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Array ( [sid] => 43018 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thoughts of an empty mind [time] => 2004-04-13 11:27:47 [hometext] => conflicting thoughts that occupy your mind for too long and won't be pushed aside so easily [bodytext] => My sight is blocked by a black-coloured nothing,
I'm helpless to move, like a puppet with no string,
This room was once familiar, now i'm completely lost,
Thoughts cloud my brain and cover it with frost
They jump out into the open, feeling at home in the dark,
sometimes clashing together, creating loud sparks,
The conditions of where i sit, correspond well with my mood,
dark and blank, with space to elude.
My thoughts dance out into the room where i cannot see,
I watch them as they waltz before crashing over me,
I shouldn't let them take ahold, i should take complete control,
But so many of them, some small, they eat away at my soul,
I fight small ones off with my sword of disregard,
the larger ones stand their ground where they'll eventually scare,
Thoughts are like demons, taunting you all the time,
My life lacks equity and a love so sublime.




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Thoughts of an empty mind

Contributed by nomie on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:27:47 AM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



My sight is blocked by a black-coloured nothing,
I'm helpless to move, like a puppet with no string,
This room was once familiar, now i'm completely lost,
Thoughts cloud my brain and cover it with frost
They jump out into the open, feeling at home in the dark,
sometimes clashing together, creating loud sparks,
The conditions of where i sit, correspond well with my mood,
dark and blank, with space to elude.
My thoughts dance out into the room where i cannot see,
I watch them as they waltz before crashing over me,
I shouldn't let them take ahold, i should take complete control,
But so many of them, some small, they eat away at my soul,
I fight small ones off with my sword of disregard,
the larger ones stand their ground where they'll eventually scare,
Thoughts are like demons, taunting you all the time,
My life lacks equity and a love so sublime.








Copyright © nomie ... [ 2004-04-13 11:27:47]
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Re: Thoughts of an empty mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Queen_Dolly on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:40:46 AM AEST
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I love your metaphorical language =)
I particularly like the phrase:
"like a puppet with no string"
Beautiful write.

Queen_Dolly


Re: Thoughts of an empty mind (User Rating: 1 )
by tiny_mo on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 12:54:11 PM AEST
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I like this poem. It's really good and moving.




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