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Array ( [sid] => 4320 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I die tonight, it's all your fault [time] => 2002-09-26 20:45:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If I die tonight
No thanks to you, now I am alright
Just because I am out of sight
Doesn’t make what you did right

I thought you wouldn’t
All this pain
I said you shouldn’t
Because you couldn’t refrain

My heart just couldn’t handle it all
I wanted to go
I wanted my heavenly Father to call
The weight was too heavy to tow

The betrayal runs too deep
The misuse…
In my marrow it will creep
There is no excuse

I prayed death would come
I want you to realize
You are no longer my chum
I hope you see the pain in my dead eyes

The heavens shook
As your heart turned black
What you took
I can never get back

To think it was you I trusted
Then you threw me away
You were the one that lusted
God will make you pay

Your hands tightly holding my head
Caused my first fear
I wish I was dead
This will not be my last tear

My death is on your head
I hope you live with guilt
It is your fault that I am dead
This is the house that you built

Now living in it I hope the pain is consuming
I hope the hurt is unbearable
That is what you get for pursuing
I was not disposable

I hope you live long
And I hope this clings to you for life
I hope it is like a never ending song
You caused so much pain and strife

I hope they treat you like dirt
I am angry and rightly so
I hope that you hurt
I hope your death is painful and slow
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If I die tonight, it's all your fault

Contributed by frustration on Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



If I die tonight
No thanks to you, now I am alright
Just because I am out of sight
Doesn’t make what you did right

I thought you wouldn’t
All this pain
I said you shouldn’t
Because you couldn’t refrain

My heart just couldn’t handle it all
I wanted to go
I wanted my heavenly Father to call
The weight was too heavy to tow

The betrayal runs too deep
The misuse…
In my marrow it will creep
There is no excuse

I prayed death would come
I want you to realize
You are no longer my chum
I hope you see the pain in my dead eyes

The heavens shook
As your heart turned black
What you took
I can never get back

To think it was you I trusted
Then you threw me away
You were the one that lusted
God will make you pay

Your hands tightly holding my head
Caused my first fear
I wish I was dead
This will not be my last tear

My death is on your head
I hope you live with guilt
It is your fault that I am dead
This is the house that you built

Now living in it I hope the pain is consuming
I hope the hurt is unbearable
That is what you get for pursuing
I was not disposable

I hope you live long
And I hope this clings to you for life
I hope it is like a never ending song
You caused so much pain and strife

I hope they treat you like dirt
I am angry and rightly so
I hope that you hurt
I hope your death is painful and slow




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Re: If I die tonight, it's all your fault (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 05:34:17 AM AEST
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Wow! You must be angry. Nice write


Re: If I die tonight, it's all your fault (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 06:49:20 AM AEST
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i want to say this to a guy i know but i just couldn't find the words, your poetry is very well written. I loved it!


Re: If I die tonight, it's all your fault (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 01:49:25 PM AEST
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I liked your poem it was good. Nice write.




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