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Array ( [sid] => 43274 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Salvage Angel [time] => 2004-04-14 21:10:39 [hometext] => Group Writes are started in the forums, and once finished added here. Please feel free to join in, or contact the moderators for more information. (The poem is set out with the contributing author's name above their contribution to this group write.) [bodytext] => The second "One word at a time" poem.

Contributors (in order of appearance)---

Daniela_Maria_Violin, Happiness, Jellybellyprincess, ShadowDaughter, morelikelyrics, Avarice_Riot, venkat, Stitch, face-in-the-crowd, Putteragain, MoonlitAngel, poetrygodslove

"Salvage Angel"

Angel of the Refuse whispers
but no such sorrow expels,
unrivalled this melancholic tantrum.
Undemonstrative expressions of the mind
entrap, encased within a sphere.
And sometimes our memories sigh wearily
through tears of the hearts and
whispers of the angels.
They hover lovingly around us,
deliberately holding, cradling our dread.
Keeping secret, silent sentry
waiting and denouncing all our fears,
stirring tumultuously the rubble I escape
teetering ever so magnanimously
unfolding the wings of dreams to mortals.
Alas, take me.
Take me, take me, take me, I'm yours
evermore to where your kiss resides.

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Salvage Angel

Contributed by YPDC_Group_Writes on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 09:10:39 PM in AEST
Topic: group



The second "One word at a time" poem.

Contributors (in order of appearance)---

Daniela_Maria_Violin, Happiness, Jellybellyprincess, ShadowDaughter, morelikelyrics, Avarice_Riot, venkat, Stitch, face-in-the-crowd, Putteragain, MoonlitAngel, poetrygodslove

"Salvage Angel"

Angel of the Refuse whispers
but no such sorrow expels,
unrivalled this melancholic tantrum.
Undemonstrative expressions of the mind
entrap, encased within a sphere.
And sometimes our memories sigh wearily
through tears of the hearts and
whispers of the angels.
They hover lovingly around us,
deliberately holding, cradling our dread.
Keeping secret, silent sentry
waiting and denouncing all our fears,
stirring tumultuously the rubble I escape
teetering ever so magnanimously
unfolding the wings of dreams to mortals.
Alas, take me.
Take me, take me, take me, I'm yours
evermore to where your kiss resides.





Copyright © YPDC_Group_Writes ... [ 2004-04-14 21:10:39]
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Re: Salvage Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:17:09 AM AEST
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To betray by the kiss, and the fear of the falling. I enjoyed this much. Thank you.


Re: Salvage Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 07:33:49 AM AEST
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oh wow....you guys did great with this..... I'm glad I started it. :)


Re: Salvage Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:32:50 PM AEST
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it did turn out great didnt it
@>~~>~~

to all who had a part in this a rose for you from me

michelle


Re: Salvage Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:05:11 AM AEST
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Done a wonderful job....all the best girls. venkat




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